Mes - Love the addition of the skyline. Would it be possible to make the leaf and 'person' to pop out of the skyline more? The only other question would be if we could eliminate the green from the bottom of the skyline and give it a cleaner look.
Okay we still are loving your concepts. I went thru some of your other work and want you to also create a logo in the complete opposite direction. For reference look at dpsnutrition.com, tfsupplements.com, supplementwarehouse.com and even bodybuilding.com...........after having a lot of people look at these logos i have had great feedback on the first one you submitted. I have also had a lot of ppl say that it may be going to natural for the look based on my business model (similar to the sites listed above) i still want to appeal to everyone like mentioned in the briefing but maybe we also go with a concept that is a bit more powerful. Im afraid the first logo may give wrong impression to the gym community. other logos to consider would be max muscle, complete nutrition and even G.N.C........thanks again for all the great stuff so far!