No that still didn't get what I thinking. I was thinking the rounded lines going from left to right on barrel not the vertical lines going through the text. Break the barrel out of the text area and have it completely connected on the top and bottom.
Still would like to see it with Firefly font. Maybe add "Bradford, Ohio" in small font below cidery and winery in open barrel space. Add "est. 2015" above "Twenty One Barrels" in the blank space. It just appears to have too much blank space between the barrel at the top and bottom. Another idea would be to shrink the barrel and leave out the "est 2015 and Bradford, Ohio". Thanks.
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