Fantastic! Great job with fixing the negative space.
Let's get rid of the last black stroke on the outside. I believe that's one too many. Also, I understand that the last white stroke can't be seen on a white background. That's perfectly fine. Leave the last white stroke, please.
Also, I do like the black grooves in the middle on the red field, but can we see what it looks like without the first 3 black grooves starting in the very center (See Markup 1)?
I'd also like to see what this would look like without the first two black circles in the red field. I think I don't like that they almost form complete circles because the white lines don't break them enough.
This is fantastic and we are very close. This continues to be my front-runner.
Can we make the distance from the T's to the grooves and the E's to the grooves equidistant (see Markup 1)? I don't want you to adjust "Turntable" to do it. That kerning and font size feels correct and still pops out at me (which is what draws me to this logo).
Also, let's fix the outer strokes. I like the pixel width of the white stroke. Let's make the black stroke the same width and then add one last white stroke on the exterior of the same width.
I absolutely love how the font looks in "Turntable." Can we take a look if we can get "Time Machine" larger? The grooves radiating out to the left and the right can be made smaller in length to compensate for "Time Machine" being larger. In fact, let's take a look at "Time Machine" without the border around it. Let's get symmetrical with Turntable. This is definitely my front-runner.
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Let me just go over this and I believe tomorrow, we'll be able to finalize this.
Thank you for making this happen. I will proudly use this new logo EVERYWHERE.
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Any thoughts of your own on this?
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Let's get rid of the last black stroke on the outside. I believe that's one too many. Also, I understand that the last white stroke can't be seen on a white background. That's perfectly fine. Leave the last white stroke, please.
Also, I do like the black grooves in the middle on the red field, but can we see what it looks like without the first 3 black grooves starting in the very center (See Markup 1)?
Thanks again!
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Thanks again!
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Can we make the distance from the T's to the grooves and the E's to the grooves equidistant (see Markup 1)? I don't want you to adjust "Turntable" to do it. That kerning and font size feels correct and still pops out at me (which is what draws me to this logo).
Also, let's fix the outer strokes. I like the pixel width of the white stroke. Let's make the black stroke the same width and then add one last white stroke on the exterior of the same width.
Thank you for your continued work on this logo!
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Would love to collaborate on this style post-tournament as I make limited release t-shirts.
Thanks for the attempt.
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I have provided an alternative for this option in entry #82, what do you think? Thanks..
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