Tucson Mitzvah PhotographyLogo Design Contest

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please check my latest revision #321 #322 #323 #324 #325, i have tried it.
Is that it? Could you tell me which color you mean? I'm a little confused.
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I would like photography more visible at a glance, when small. (letterhead, etc)

text should be about 40% mitzvah, 35% tucson, and 25% photography (photography visible at a glance). not a hard-and-fast rule at all, but a guide as to what I think is important in this market/city

I would like photography more visible at a glance, when small. (letterhead, etc) darker(?) idunno

I would like photography more visible at a glance, when small. (letterhead, etc)

please check my latest revision #182 #183 #184 #185, I have tried to highlight the word photography.

thanks

I like the gradients, though I'd like to make photography more visible at first glance

please check my latest revision #161 #164 #166 #167 #168, i have tried changing the color.

is it like that?

if photography were a bit more visible. the colors are regal/royal/hebrew and work well