I like this one although would want the "visions" part to be bigger in case we are sponsors or something and the type might be too small in some places.
Could the bamboo be more upright some way? It looks like a fallen tree instead of a strong tree - Like the font and the size of the font between lines. Maybe brighten up the gold more of the sun.
Can we see this with the triangle straight/ centered and not tilted? Can we also add a couple of leafs to the bamboo so that it looks like a tree instead of bones
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Please see #75 #76.
Thanks
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Thanks for feedback. Please see #24 for update.
Thanks,
Cleo
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