On the pictoral mark. I like the guy and the blazer and the active stance, although I think we need something simpler with less detail, like a figure outline or raster. I'm wondering whether it is possible to reduce the amount of detail you have here without losing the concept. If you wanted to create a variant, try a much more casual look - check out our website homepage at trunk club dot com to see the kinds of clothes we offer. If you find it too time consuming, the pictoral mark is secondary and you could focus on the word mark.
On the lettering, the lower case is not right for us. I like the "CLUB" part of the logo, in all caps because it is clean. Perhaps try something a little less modern (but not traditional or olde-timey!). Something more like PRADA or MONOCLE magazine. Classic but not old. Also, the lighting effects on the lettering will not work for us. We are not "flashy" and this feels a bit too "night club."