Hi Afterglow! Thanks for posting. From your portfolio, it seems like you have a knack for pictoral marks. I really like the umbrella in Bumbershoot and the icon in casababy. I wonder if you might combine what you have here with some kind of stylized garment icon. We're about outfits, so showing a combination of shirt + pants might work. Alternatively, you might be able to develop something like a small crest or shield containing intertwined letters TC. I'd focus your work on this aspect since you seem to have an edge here.
The fonts you've chosen seem a bit "sketchy" or hand drawn effect. We'd like something more crisp but not too modern.
The subtitle should read:
MEN'S OUTFITTERS