I think this is my favorite. Can you make 'Your Horse's Health Starts Here' be 'less bold'? It stands out almost too much. Alternatively, perhaps a shade of grey? Thanks!
Thanks a lot for the feedback. Please check revisions #230#231#232#233 . Hope you like them. Please feel free to ask if I missed something or you want any changes. God bless!
I got feedback in my survey. 1. Could 'Veterinary Dentistry' and 'Your horse's health starts here' could be done in a san serif to offset them more from 'True Dentistry'? 2. This may make the third line in green look fine, but I would still like to see it in black. 3. For an small extra fee, would your offer another version without the third line? 4. See Markup above. Thanks!
Really small stuff but could you make the straight line of the jaw end flat at the curve of the horses, curved cheek (instead of coming over it). Also, could we try a couple of different shades of greens/blues?
Okay, I will just ask 2 more things as this comes into focus. Can you try a different font color (black or blue) for the slogan and second, would you be able to use any other variations of the blues and greens? Just curious thanks!
Also, don't worry about the second ear, my assistant said it looks fine!!
I am really liking these! I think just playing around with where these lines go are about the only thing I would change. I am back and forth as to whether or not adding part of the other ear would look good... Yours are my top choices (if you can't see that).
Yes, I am really liking these. I think maybe playing around with the lines, trying maybe: —Your horse's health starts here—
Not 100% sure on where to put lines but what you're doing is what I am looking for. Thanks!!
So instead of another physical line, I was looking to add my slogan(in a smaller and maybe different font). The slogan is: "Your horse's health starts here"
The eye is perfect!
Wow, this is really nice! If anything, I would like to see the eye a touch larger. Also, any way you could include the logo as a third line? Something I could use (or not) depending on what the logo is going on?
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Also, don't worry about the second ear, my assistant said it looks fine!!
Not 100% sure on where to put lines but what you're doing is what I am looking for. Thanks!!
The eye is perfect!