Entry #35
I like the TRF brand, nice work. My top choice so far, bravo!
Overall Impression:
The logo is on track with our original vision however it is lacking an identity. The TRF brand looks good but needs a small amount of stylizing I would like to see a bolder thicker version, looking for to make a statement. The font should be supporting and not so heavy. The font should also be refined to a classy and sheek font stlye. Here are suggestions below regarding design and style.
Suggestions:
I would like to see these two different comps if possible.
a) Arched logo version - Please place the "Triple R Frames" font in an "arch" above the brand. The font needs to be a cleaner and more elegant font type (maybe "Bentley Motors" Logo font?). Also please work on spacing, it looks like TRIPLER instead of TRIPLE R. I think this new layout will fix the spacing issue.
b) Circular logo version - Think of a "coin! The TRF Brand is the focal point and the other copy points are supporting around the TRF brand.Surround the entire circular area around the rim with "Triple R Frames on top half and Rare, Rustic, Reclaimed on the bottom half" so the logo becomes one design element.
******* "Would be awesome to see the RRR's from Entry 22 of yours, could be cool. Please try.