Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm traveling this morning but will work up those changes asap this afternoon.
I think I understand what you mean about the birds. As if you are looking at them from underneath or they are rising in front of you so you can see their belly, underside of their wings, head and tail?
As requested, this one has more and thinner rays, and the rainbow has been changed to more typical colors with better separation between them. I changed the bird so we see the belly with the wings above, the head and tail. I'm working on some more variations of that as well as the colors in the name.
I thought I would give one more try with this different idea. I added the silver lining and moved the words up for a nice balance and clean look. Thank you, Tim