I Would like to kindly ask you two things: can you apply a thinner line in the circle. We think it will give a better touch of ellegance. Also, the boy who's pushing the other one has his back leg kind of lifted, which gives the impression of a dog.
I'd love to make these revisions... you'll have to rank me in the top 5 in order to submit at this stage of the contest though. There's 3 days, so we have plenty of time. I'll be around all weekend so I'll keep an eye out.
Erik, thank for guiding me. I was not sure exactly how this phase worked. Just put you as one of the top 5. We just love as you did. Besides what I have suggested, If you can do anything to make if softer, a higher level of purity, it would be appreciated. Many thanks, pzkhwr
Erik thanks very much for your post. We initially thought that had you fixed the legs, we would have the perfect logo. However the shape of the boy pushing the other one is still weird. Perhaps we should leave the boy standing, with his feet touching the ground? Can I kindly ask you to put a spin to it? Let´s see how it comes out. Thanks very much again.
PS: We also value designs with a highher level of purity, softer, as we mentioned in our previous message. I know you are under your creative process, but if you could come up with a variation a little cleaner/more delicate, we would appreciate it.