Tri SwimmingLogo Design Contest

My version,
thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #99)

Thanks, Nat. I like this design. I'm enjoying how the logo makes a nice triangle feel over tri swimming. I'm not 100% sold on the swimmer. Could you make the swimmer a bit more abstract or maybe keep an arm type triangle in orange and make the head detached. The reason I'm wanting it to break it up a bit as the way the swimmer is postured it looks like his head is straining. If we go a little more w/lines/curves in lieu of an actual body we can let the audience interpret a swimmer without having to critique technique. Thanks so much for your submission!

Hi!,

thanks for your feedback. Yes, I know what you mean. It´s not easy to keep a correct posture while forming the triangle, so I tried to make if fast to get some feedback before the contest ends. Don´t worry, I´ll take some time to work on it.

Thanks!,
Nat

Here´s a new version. Modified the posture of the swimmer but I think it´s affecting the triangle. I´ll keep trying.

Nat

(This comment references Entry #104)

Hi Nat, I agree the triangle is affected. Can you use a simpler triangle, maybe soft lines instead of trying to make an actual arm/hand and completely detach the head and make it more of a circle. Also, we are really leaning toward the orange/black color scheme. Thanks so much!!!!

No problem.

Let me get back to you in some minutes.
Thanks!,
Nat

ok, new version. Total abstraction. bottom shape acts as arms AND water at the same time.
Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #125)

Much better! Can you please use lines for the triangle vice having it filled in and a little sleeker on the swimmer? Less is more here. Getting closer.

Also, we're liking tri in orange and swimming in black! Thanks so much!

Here´s an update. I don´t think I understand what you mean by "sleeker".

Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #143)

A new version.
Nat

(This comment references Entry #209)