I'd like to explore adding "don't be afraid." Keep it small. The outer ring an "t"s I'd like to think about other options. Thickness. Drop shadows. Don't be afraid to explore some 3D aspects to the character. Congrats on making it to the next round!
This feels stronger though I'm not sure about the color making the "t"s feeling isolated. Maybe a thin circle around them on the outside? Are there other "t" fonts that could be used? Also, I appreiciate the extra "t" used. Last though, what are your thoughts about a second popping in some how?
The character is very interesting. I had been thinking about a clock face with thirteen hours. This is kind of similar even though you only have 12 "t"s. That might be worth exploring. The number "13" font seems to not complement the "t"s.
The blue isn't the right color/choice of blue. I'm not sure what the best choice is but it feels flat.
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The blue isn't the right color/choice of blue. I'm not sure what the best choice is but it feels flat.