Hi ngrandu,
Thanks for your submissions.
Regarding #95 and #96, I feel like we change the idea/message.
I would suggest to work from the entry #83 and make some changes:
- Adapt the map to show clearly frontier(s) (that the fellow will jump out). Your idea of 2 shades is good but try with light grey or effects (regarding the map only, I pref the #87)
- For the text, could you please change font like
#46, #18, #14, etc. In addition, could you add a light fade like #82, #85? Also, we really enjoy check in the A like #14.
- For the fellow, papers drop out of the briefcase does not give expected result so I would go back on idea like #83 with pins. Could you try some submissions with 2 or 3 pins to show that the applications tracked people physical position at certain point of time?
Thanks in advance!
Jérôme.