Here is another design, using your idea to make the text line thinner. I also make the text bigger and added a couple of birds above the text that integrate really well in my opinion.
Hmmm..Little hard to explain. The current logo is compressed into a solid mass. It doesn’t give the feeling of the giant open skies and the surrounding area. It seems a bit tight. Perhaps slightly thinner lines around the words maybe?
I like the strength in this one. Can we try some different fonts?Perhaps decreasing the block letters at the bottom . Needs just a touch of femininity to balance the masculinity.
I like the concept. It is different than a lot of the ones I’ve been receiving. I like the unity between the graphics and the word tranquil. I would like to find a good balance between the tranquility of the logo but also the strength of the logo. These are tall powerful mountain peaks. I would like to see a little more strength in the logo. The lines are a little too thin and wispy for what I am looking for.
Hello, this is my first idea, a few circular lines, symbolizing unity that when joined together create silhouettes of mountains. The writing has a watery finish that really settles the calm feeling of the whole design. I hope you will like it and I am looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
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