We have received Entry #2 and think that it is very creative! The use of the "p" as the trampoline shows movement. The logo is playful, the child looks content. Since the word "program" is there, is it possible to work in the French spelling of the word somehow? The translation is "programme"... so, an extra "mme". How would the logo look if we were to add a second colour? Thanks!
Thank you so much for the feedback. I am submitting the revisions you asked for. If there is anything that you wish to see, please do not hesitate to ask.
We really like entry #3. The change in colour for the "p" is great. We checked an on-line dictionnary, and both program and programme are used interchangeably in Canada.. so, seeing as it is both bilingual and an accepted usage, we will stick with the word "programme".
Just got more feedback, for Entry #3, is it possible to change the blue and the orange to a slightly darker hue? As well, we were wondering if the figure (boy) could be made less gender-specific. One comment was that, with his spikey hair, it may be difficult to make out on a business card. Any thoughts?
Thank you, we're pleased to be part of this creative process!
Thank you so much for your great feedback, it really helps with the logo creation process. I have darkened the blue and orange, and will be happy to continue making adjustments until you are 100% satisfied. It is funny to me that you perceive the child as male, because it was inspired by my granddaughter (who admittedly has short hair and is a little tomboy) jumping on a trampoline. I have made the hair less 'spikey'... there should be no problem with reproduction on a business card, think of all the small type that is perfectly legible. Please continue with your wonderful input and I will try to craft your logo to your exact requirements. Karen
Hello, we like the orange shirt in Entry #6 (as well as the more rounded "p"). Is it possible to darken the hue on the blue for this logo as well?
As well, we're wondering if the figure of the child could be a more cartoonish character. The feedback from some of our employees was that the child looks a little hyperactive, and too realistic. We're wondering if it can be softened up a little? An image of a child "moving up" to suggest development would be of great interest to us.