I'd love to see a few more options if you have time. You are very talented. I love the swoosh you used. It gives the logo movement/energy and it kind of signifies a path which could be symbolic of someone's own personal journey/path to health. I am going to check out your portfolio tonight and if i see anything logo or elements that I really like I will let you know. Thanks and have a great night!
Love your two new entries. I had a few thoughts... On #70 can you turn the "for" horizontal (maybe play with a few different positions) and make the yellow swoosh (maybe bigger) look a little bit more like a path. Symbolizing someone's journey to wellness.
Love #69! Can you try a small change... Make the "A" normal but half blue and half black. I think that looks cool. Then just try and position "for" somehow in between the words train and life. I do think the word "for"should be small than the words train and life. If you can play around with a few options that would be great. I like the swoosh around the bottom of the words.
If this doesn't make sense I will be more than glad to clarify.
Thank you for make the changes. I really like #74 and #73 a lot.
# 74 Can you turn the "A" completely black...I know I asked for blue and black but after seeing it, I think it will look better all black. :-) Also create more space so the for is not as crowded. It looks cool being the dot over the eye but I would love to see it as a stand a lone word a little bigger as an option. I like the type style and the swoosh.
#73 Can you try a more modern type style that still allows you to connect the A and L...the way they connect is cool. If you can't no worries. I'd like to see if you can use the swoosh from #74 in this logo somehow. It may be to busy but a thought. I also think it would be interesting to see the yellow somehow moving further though the logo and maybe even into the I and N.
I like #105 can you try and bringing the "For" down and making it a little bigger. Keep it a separate from the "A" and "i". I think the integration is cool but would love to see the word For done separately. Maybe making the dot over the "i" a blue (star or square to match the "i" in Train). I love how the blue swoosh goes into the "i" in train. Really cool!
Love where you are going with #105. Can you do Train For Life so the "For" is not integrated into the "A" or "I". I'd like to see the "For" bigger but not as big as the other words.
Once you have done this can you provide a few options with different type styles and maybe giving the swoosh a little more dimension? You could maybe give some part of the logo dimension by using an iridescent/color feel. Just a thought.
I like the way you did the dot in the "i" blue in #105 and I also like the pop of orange color.
Once you finish can you put your favorite logo on a black background so I can see it reversed out?
I would also love to see you use a color combination that you like the best to see something a little different. Might be nice to compare.