Train For LifeLogo Design Contest

I really like your work. They are all good. If you have time can you submit a few more options (maybe without using the abstract person). I like it but it would be nice to see what you come up with as an alternative. You are really talented. Thanks

Thank you. I think I understand where you are coming from and will be working on some updates.

regards

That is awesome. :-) I like the two new one's you just did.

I love the swoosh you use in a lot of the logo's. It gives the logo movement/energy and it kind of signifies a path which could be symbolic of someone's own personal journey/path to health. I am going to check out your portfolio tonight and see if any of the logos or logo elements might have application to Train For Life. I will send you another post with my thoughts. :-) Thanks and have a great night!

Just saw your new one...really cool!

Thank you, Terrie. I appreciate what you are putting into this.

cheers

It is fun. I love design but can't do logo's. Thank goodness you can. :-)

That is all from me for now.

thank again for the kind words

Btw since most client often ask me which ones I prefer I think that #34 turned out nicely.

Let me know what you think.

I like 34 as well. It looks like you are calling it lights out for now...me too. For what they are worth, I sent you a private message with some random thoughts . :-)

Idea...entry 10 and 8. Can you make the symbol representing a person yellow. It's a small change but may add that extra pop. Thanks

Will do in a sec. Left my browser running.

Mint...I LOVE your new additions. :-)

Can you do #51 without the figure of a person in the graphic? I am thinking that would make it a little more masculine. Also maybe the sun graphic in 51 instead of the person. I like the person graphic but afraid it makes the logo a little feminine. There may be another graphic you could use but I can't think of one.

Maybe add a hint of yellow and more dimension to #33. I like the way the words are laid out in that option.

Thanks!!!!!!!

Hi Mint...I hope you are great.I wanted to get you to make some small changes to your logo submissions when you get a chance. I love all your designs so below are just small tweaks to see options.
I love #62's graphic and word layout but wanted to see if you could play around with a few diffrent type styes.
# 26 Can you turn the circle that represents the head yellow and the word "for" yellow.
# 50 take the person out of the graphic and maybe add a small sun...your call.
# 2 - I like it a lot but I am thinking it needs something to make it pop. I actually like the yellow person representing the "I" so don't change that.
# 15 I'd like to see what it would look like with the "T" in train not a person...maybe some type of cool graphic. Maybe the dot over the eye could be the yellow start...just a thought. Love the green leaf over the "e".
Also try # 15 with the graphic of the person in logo #4 in the "o" in for. That may be a cool dot over the "i" in train or some how incorporated into the "T". I think that graphic is more nuetural and not as feminine.
# 49 take the graphic of the person out
# 33 add yellow and a little more dimension.
# 9 move the icon to the left and scale to balance the icon and the words. One of my co-workers really LOVES this logo.
I like #1 a lot...I think it is just missing a little pop. I can't put my finger on it but I really like the logo a lot. Maybe more dimension and add some black to the logo.

This is a lot of detail...I hope the feed back is ok and helpful. Everything you have done is great...it will be cool to see what tanspires with the small changes. Please take creative liscense if you think of something you like better. :-)

hi there,

Just letting you know that I got your feedback and will be working on updates.

I need to wrap some things first, but then this my top priority.

best regards

Love you stuff!!!!!

Thanks for the quick response. Please feel free to take some creative lisence. I am probably moving into more of what people do in the final stages but your stuff is so good, I wanted to see different versions with small changes.

Thanks!

I will need an hour or so to complete all.

I think you gave me pretty good feedback, which I appreciate greatly as I said previously.

You will see some updates soon.

thanks

Awesome!

Sorry about referencing #15 in the above message. I know that is not yours so I apologize. It is hard to keep all the logo's straight. :-)

Yup. Understood, I was just going to ignore it and do the rest : )

lol.

Glad you have a sense of humor. :-)

I think I made all the changes requested. As you can see, most turned out better.

cheers

Very cool...I love the additional options.

Two small things when you get time...not a fire drill!

I really like #1 a lot...I think it is just missing a little pop. I can't put my finger on it but I really like the logo a lot. Maybe more dimension and add some black to the logo. I trust your creativity.
I love the new #97 - Can you do the old colors but absolutely keep the type style and new graphic and word placement.
That is all for now unless you get a burst of inspiration. :-)
Thanks

Gladly. Here are the changes :

#99 #100 #101

Mint..I am going to put the 3 new logo's you did with the circle graphic and new type styles at the bottom. Once I have time I am going to compare the 3 new one's with the original one and determine which type style I like best.

Thanks

I have a few more ideas but we are all good for now. If you are inspired feel free to send more. :-)

Thanks for your hard work.

I have a few more ideas but we are all good for now. If you are inspired feel free to send more. :-)

Thanks for your hard work.

I have some cool ideas I want to get you to do so expect a message later with details. Happy Thanksgiving!

Happy Thanksgiving, Terrie.

Looking forward to your thoughts.

Have a great time today!

I am going to move some of the logo's into the disregard bucket so I can begin to narrow my focus a bit.
Request if you can...
1. I like #85 and #86...which do you like best?
2. Please try the one you like best with a path more like #94...curious to see what that would look like.
3. Try adding a little more dimension to #61 and #1
4. Once you finish the above can you but the logo's on a black background so I can see what they look like reversed out?
5. I would love to see you play around with a different color combination that you like just to see what it would look like.
6. What are your top three favorites and favorite overall?
7. Maybe play around with using an iridescent blue...that technique is pretty cool and can add some dimension.

Thanks a ton and Happy Thanksgiving.

From the two, I prefer #85 (which you incidentally have ranked higher).

Here is the requested change of the road. I think it is nice.
#153

As for #61 and #1, I am sorry to say that I don't know any way to do so. If you can be more specific I would love to make those changes.

I also cannot wrap my head around the iridescent blue. I haven't seen any good logos with that technique (maybe you can give me some examples).