Instead of the triangular roof shape with the chimney make it curved/arc like the greenhouse roof shape. Remove the little squares from the center. Maybe just a flower in the center.
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I like the swoosh but it makes it look too fast. Maybe the more gentle "S" shape of the path would work better. The flowers are too busy and the building does not represent our business. Take a look at the pictures I uploaded for the contest. Thank you
The birds make me think of the ocean, buildings remind me of cityscape, the lower building doesn't indicate a greenhouse or any other structure part of my business.
Also the mountains in my area of the world are not so sharply pointed or steep. could they be pushed back into the background further. Maybe add some color to indicate flowers on the side of the path
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If you want to change or any changes in my design, please feel free to contact me. I will be happy to help you to finish this contest
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ready, I'll revise it soon, I'll change the course from the original up, I'll change it from the left lane to the bottom of the mountain. And change the mount as you asked. If there is input, please contact me immediately and I will immediately revise it.
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I really like the simplicity and depth of this one. It actually fits the location of my business perfectly. The main road that goes by my business is on a curve very similarly indicated in this design. Could you add a line drawing of the pergola structure to see what that would look like?
Thank You! Overall, I like it. Could you try starting the path from the left of the circle and end it at the base of the mountain rather then up into the mountain. Maybe the shapes of the greenhouse, building and square door opening in layered starting with the hoop house. I think i shared the image I came up with in a doodle drawing. Maybe make it small enough to fit next to the LLC . I dont know, just feedback
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Thanks for the feedback..
If you want to change or any changes in my design, please feel free to contact me. I will be happy to help you to finish this contest
Thanks you
Best Regards
dnelz
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ready, I'll revise it soon, I'll change the course from the original up, I'll change it from the left lane to the bottom of the mountain. And change the mount as you asked. If there is input, please contact me immediately and I will immediately revise it.
thank you,
best regards
dnelz
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