TP BuiltLogo Design Contest

then what else should I revise?

I really like this

please feedback
how about this ?

okey wait 5 minute
i will revise asap

Could you perhaps remove the window and make the TP a bit higher?

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how about my revision? thanks

how about my revision? thanks

how about my revision? thanks

I really love this design! would it be possible to maybe make the floor of house a little lower to make the p a little longer? Also how would could I make this stand out on a black trailer? Perhaps a white pinstripe or something around the edge? Thanks alot!