Touch GreetingsLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the design. I want to provide some feedback on your logo. First, I'd like to see the design with a white background as I'll likely want the final logo to have a transparent background - it will be used on the kiosk and the back of each card.
I'm not a fan of the computerized hand touching the logo. The font looks a bit plain and old-fashioned, i'd try something more stylistic, but still readable. I don't think the "target" logo is a good idea given the Target Corp's trademark.
Hopefully you have some time to provide some other creative ideas - I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Hi -

I'm hoping you can make some adjustments to your submitted logo and submitted a couple other versions, as I like your thought about using a hand.
- Make the background transparent or white
- Make "Touch" a lighter, more vibrant green. Use a script-like font to give the feeling of handwriting
-Make "Greetings" bigger and use a bit more stylistic font, not just standard block text. See other submissions. Use a vibrant blue for the word, see other submissions.
-Smooth the lines on the hand image and make more life-like and less like a cartoon. See below link for an example of the hand graphic that I like better
http://www.eastcoastpos.com/softtouch/images/SoftTouchLogo.jpg
Use your creativity though, it doesn't need to match exactly, but I like the gradient shadows that make the graphic look more 3D

I'm looking forward to seeing revised submissions!!

New revision added following your suggestion.
Comments are welcomed. Thank you!!

(This comment references Entry #32)

New revision added.
Hand touching two words and new font for "Touch".
Comments are welcomed. Thank you!!

(This comment references Entry #53)

Thanks for your revisions. I ended up extending the contest for a few more days as I'd like to get some feedback from a couple people with whom I'm working. As you can see, I like your design a lot. Once I get some feedback, I'll pass on some comments and hopefully shoot for one more final revision.

Have a good weekend -

Thank you very much for your comments.
Any changes you want to see, please, don't hesitate to tell me.

Have a good weekend too!!

Regards,
Javier (Verba Volant Branding)