Thanks for posting your logos - these are my favorite so far. I want to provide some feedback and hopefully get some more designs from you. The things I liked...I like your choice of font and how it differs between "Touch" and "Greetings". I would like to see the "T" in Touch more well-defined, it looks ok in #8 but a bit strange in #10. I like the alignment of "Touch" and "Greetings", how the T comes down next to the G. I'd like to see future logos on a white background - I'm going to ask for the final designs with a transparent background so I can use it on a variety of backgrounds (kiosk, back of each card). I don't like the image choices in any of the logos - maybe you have some other ideas? I'm sorry I can't give better guidance on the image choice but I'll know it when I see it! I like your use of blues and greens, I think the colors look sharp. Hopefully you have some time to provide some more designs - I'm looking forward to seeing them. I'll plan on reviewing more frequently going forward (couple times per day).
Hi, thanks for giving feedback. I drew more designs, I hope they are to your liking. I shall be able to work on more tomorrow night (full-time job during the day). Hope to keep your interest, Mel
Great new submissions, thanks for responding. I do like the bird graphic, I'm just not sure its relevant for the product. Additionally, Twitter has a very similar logo. Let me provide 2 specific ideas for revision and then see if you have any other thoughts in addition.
1) I really like the colors and fonts of entry #12 - green "Touch" in script and blue "Greetings" in stylized block text. One thought would be the use of a hand in the logo, similar to another submission but with some specific changes. The hand graphic could be touching the middle of the "O" but there shouldn't be a dot in the middle because it's too close to Target's logo. Also, I don't like the computerized-looking hand, it looks cartoonish, which I want to stay away from. I'd like to make the hand more life-like and include some gradient shadows that makes the graphic look more 3D. I've posted a link to one graphic I like below, you don't need to match exactly, just to give you an idea http://www.eastcoastpos.com/softtouch/images/SoftTouchLogo.jpg
2) Instead of the hand graphic, use a fingerprint design behind the company name text. I like this idea because it's a unique graphic, I can't think of too many other companies with this logo. There is a link to an example below, again, no need to match exactly, but maybe you can create some variations with different colors and styles to give me an idea of what you're thinking.
3) I'm still open to new ideas as well if you've got other ideas. While the card will be sold through an automated kiosk, I do want the logo to feel refined and classy.
Thanks and looking forward to seeing your ideas!!!
Hello, 1) I created designs with more life-like hands on #22, #23, #24 and #25 with different layouts from the text. 2) And these two have the fingerprint concept; #20 and #21... 3) I will submit more designs tomorrow night. Thank you, Mel
Great additions! Thanks for taking on the fingerprint concept - I really like the look a lot. I'm definitely much more excited about last night's submissions than any of the others I've seen.
I wanted to give feedback on three of the designs to see if you can tweak a bit - they definitely do not need a lot of work. Also, if you have other ideas around similar concepts or colors, I'm open to seeing new ideas as well.
#20 is my favorite - I like the thought about adding the blue gradient background. The one tweak is to see if you can replicate the fingerprint design a bit better. it looks good small but on the close-up, its a little too circular/swirly. I know, it's nit-picky, but considering it may be large on the website, I was hoping you could try making it look a little more like the image in the link below http://www.seeklogo.com/images/F/FingerPrint-logo-7F29615066-seeklogo.com.gif
I'd like to see #21 with the same updated fingerprint, hopefully that's easy to just copy over.
I also like the concept in #23 but don't like the shape of the finger of the fading from blue to green. I like how the logo in this design fits nicely in the frame vs the spacing in #24 and #25 where the hand is sticking out. So keep the design for #23. Use the hand design from #25, all blue with the white outline. Also, move the hand towards the upper-right just slightly so the dot on the "i" isn't touching the hand.
Again, great work last night. If you have other concept ideas or new colors to try, I'll look forward to seeing them tomorrow.
Hello, This is for time to do designs in the weekend. Here are some more designs; I created #79, #80 an #81 with a 3D style hand. #82 and #83 are the drawn thumbprints with a sparkle. Thanks, Mel
Thanks for the new designs, the 3D look is really interesting. I go back and forth between your original designs and the new ones with which style I like better. I ended up extending the contest for a couple days because I'm going to get some feedback from people with whom I'm working. Once I hear back from them, hopefully this weekend, I'll send some comments over and we can shoot for one final revision.
Thanks for all your work so far, you've been great.
I'm going to end the contest but unfortunately, I'm not using one of your designs. While I really liked your work, I asked a bunch of friends this weekend for their opinion and I got different feedback. The company will be targeting female card buyers so I'm glad I asked for different opinions. That being said, thank you so much for your work and best of luck to you!