Hi Alfred,
Thanks for your submission! Interesting take, it leaves a retro impression - Saturday Night Fever or Grease. Firstly, could you resubmit with the correct spelling - tote Scarf. We would also like the typography to take on a flowy element. It's fast, good, but fast and flowy would be better. Lastly, we think there is a lot of room with this typography to cleverly display the functionality of the product. Perhaps the zip in the 'f' could be enclosing a portion of one of the previous letters? Also, feel free to submit in alternate color schemes.