Entry #110: Hal-le-freakin-lujiah! This is awesome! I love the letterform , and the addition of the tiny star is genius- since my jewelry is made with gemstones which actually sparkle! I love that the star is so small, it is just that little addition that gives it some pizaaz, without being cheezy, and the logo itself is still quite simple, yet elegant- AND it definitely feels slightly feminine ( not overly so, which is what i wanted ). Great Job!
I would like to tweak the font of the brand name a little bit though, if possible. Could you space the brand name down vertically a little bit? Just a smidge. So there is just a tiny bit more space from the letterform to the brand name. Also, I would like to see if you can space the brand name out a little further horizontally. Again, just a smidge, but I would like to have the letterform centered over the brand name.
Lastly, I "think" i like the brand name in all caps, but in all caps I think I may prefer a different font, a little less "tall" of a font. Similar to rank #3, or #5 or #7- to give you an idea. OR perhaps there is another font that goes well with the letterform? Meaning, the style of the T and R???
Ok, i appreciate the choices- I think i need to combine a few of them...so here goes:
Entry #126: This font size and spacing is good. I am not 100% in love with the font, but i think it is the best so far and I appreciate you doing what I asked. However, I feel the black color of the font may be too harsh with the lighter gray letterform. I also liked the little star better when it was the same color as- or lighter then the letterform ( this one it is darker ). So : can you lighten up the star and try a dark grey for the font - as you did in #125 ( but keep the letterform a lighter grey - the shade it is )??
Alternatively, can you do #126 in the same original letterform color ( #110), lighter color star ( as in #110 ) but keep the font of the brand name black. Let me see how that looks?
Hi, i still really love your submissions, I am just having a problem with the font: that is why i keep going back and forth between #137 and #134.
Entry #134 I feel the font almost appears too heavy with the movement and light feel you get from the letterform. And entry #137 I just feel the font is just too plain. I feel like I almost need something a little in between the two. Something like Engravers SB but with some "movement" in it??? Not sure, but to get the font just right is going to be important to me before i can choose a winner.
As you said, the color(s) i can wait to tweak until the contest ends.