Also, can you bring the tornado up a bit? We want it to look taller than our text portion - overall making the tornado look/feel like it is big, scary, and running away from us but we are right beside it.
Hello! Looking really good. Thank you. We know this takes a lot of time and we really appreciate your effort.
Tornado:
- This new version is great, but there are some aspects of your original tornado we really like:
- Can we see a similar curvature and shape of this new tornado matched to the original tornado you presented?
— I.e. We like that your original tornado gave the feeling that the text was chasing the tornado.
— The top of the tornado is sloped bit more towards text.
— Tornado overall is bent and sloped away from the text giving a feeling that the text is chasing the tornado.
- Can we see the top of your original tornado put on to the top of this new tornado?
- Can we try sharpening the bottom of this new tornado more to the idea of your original tornado?
- We like the horizontal lines in the new tornado. Can we try taking out 2 or 3 of the horizontal lines? Is it possible to sharpen one line or two with small but similar effect of your original tornado?
- Coloring - can we match the gradient style of the original tornado you had?
- Grunge - looks great - can we reduce he overspray to me similar to your original tornado?
Text:
- Can we try the lightning bolt with no colour?
- Can we try taking the grey out?
- we like the lines you have crossing/breaking the font. However, seem to be in an X shape - can this be adjusted to be less uniform looking and more random?
We still really like the text, the frame around the text, the slogan.
That tornado isn't quite what we are looking for.
What we like:
- angle of the tornado
- the size of it - width and heighth
- the amount grunge is perfect
- the colouing we like
- we like the lines floating outside the tornado to show motion
What we don't like:
- The structural lines of the tornado feel a bit tribal, where we are looking for the lines to be a bit more horizontal and tornado like - similar to the examples we sent, particularly the bottom two tornadoes.
We like the orange bar and the orange lightning bolt. Can you try a brighter tangerine orange here with maybe a gradient of oranges on the outline frame. And with a new tornado as mentioned in our private message.
We like the orange bar and the orange lightning bolt. Can you try a brighter tangerine orange here with maybe a gradient of oranges on the outline frame. And with a new tornado as mentioned in our private message.
We like the use of colours here. Can we see a brighter tangerine type orange used in your designs? Maybe even a gradient of oranges somewhere? On the outside line?
Liking this design. Thanks! We do need this logo as one solid colour, but for other applications, can we see this logo with some colour? Our brand colour is orange as you will see at www.TornadoWatch.com. We are thinking maybe the the outline is orange? Maybe the lightning bolt?
The Tornado - can we see different tornado options. We would like to see the tornado having a grunge feel similar to font. We like the look of the tornado pushing slightly outside the 4 frame markers.
The four frame markers around the tornado - can we see different options and have these grunged up as well like the font.
The font - we are liking this. Can we see other options that are similar?
I can make all the modifications or variations you might need. I'm here to help even long after the contest ends. Thank you for this opportunity - Kent
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Tornado:
- This new version is great, but there are some aspects of your original tornado we really like:
- Can we see a similar curvature and shape of this new tornado matched to the original tornado you presented?
— I.e. We like that your original tornado gave the feeling that the text was chasing the tornado.
— The top of the tornado is sloped bit more towards text.
— Tornado overall is bent and sloped away from the text giving a feeling that the text is chasing the tornado.
- Can we see the top of your original tornado put on to the top of this new tornado?
- Can we try sharpening the bottom of this new tornado more to the idea of your original tornado?
- We like the horizontal lines in the new tornado. Can we try taking out 2 or 3 of the horizontal lines? Is it possible to sharpen one line or two with small but similar effect of your original tornado?
- Coloring - can we match the gradient style of the original tornado you had?
- Grunge - looks great - can we reduce he overspray to me similar to your original tornado?
Text:
- Can we try the lightning bolt with no colour?
- Can we try taking the grey out?
- we like the lines you have crossing/breaking the font. However, seem to be in an X shape - can this be adjusted to be less uniform looking and more random?
Thank you!
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That tornado isn't quite what we are looking for.
What we like:
- angle of the tornado
- the size of it - width and heighth
- the amount grunge is perfect
- the colouing we like
- we like the lines floating outside the tornado to show motion
What we don't like:
- The structural lines of the tornado feel a bit tribal, where we are looking for the lines to be a bit more horizontal and tornado like - similar to the examples we sent, particularly the bottom two tornadoes.
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Have a nice Thanksgiving.
Take care - Kent
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The four frame markers around the tornado - can we see different options and have these grunged up as well like the font.
The font - we are liking this. Can we see other options that are similar?
The slogan - can you put this in all caps?
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