The pose for the dancer is more vintage, good swing dance pose. Can it look like they are wearing pants rather than just their legs fading down into their feet (that's part of the reason it looks modern, I think). Also, although we don't want couples dancing together, we do want both men and women to feel inspired and invited to join by our logo.
Prefer solid colors to the striping on the figure and in the "O."
The fonts are still very modern. Maybe Google 1930s and 1940s fonts for inspiration.
Would like to see this without guy/girl pairing of dancers (like a dancer or dancers in the O, just not guy/girl pairing) and a different choice than red.
No obvious guy/girl couples dancing, please. If there are full figures dancing in the logo their gender, age and race all need to be ambiguous. In our group we have women that dance with women, men that dance with men, etc. and people of all ages and races. We want to portray that inclusive community. That is very important to us!
We are open to dancing legs, feet, shoes, dancing letters, dancing inanimate objects. (No dancing animals, please, though.)
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Figure is in a good pose, but still looks contemporary rather than vintage.
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Fonts still look too modern.
Solid colors, please, not stripes. And green is an accent color for us, for our main designs we use more teal, yellow and navy.
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Would prefer solid colors to striping.
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thanks
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Prefer solid colors to the striping on the figure and in the "O."
The fonts are still very modern. Maybe Google 1930s and 1940s fonts for inspiration.
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THANKS
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The green is an accent color only, we'd prefer teal, yellow and navy in our logo.
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The font and figure still look very modern. We really want a vintage feel to this logo because our dances come from the 1920s, 1930s and 1940s.
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We are open to dancing legs, feet, shoes, dancing letters, dancing inanimate objects. (No dancing animals, please, though.)