I like the direction of your design best, but I like the colors and font on my #1 ranked entry better. If you could use the colors and possibly the font of the 1st entry, I would rank yours 1st.
it is looking better. Could we see a simpler version of it. Im thinking if I put this logo on a printed shirt that it may be hard to get the details of the picture on the monitor. Maybe a simpler version would make the logo more versatile.