eibrans, I'm just thinking of when I add the logo to our website it will be small at the top of the page, so I want to be able to read the words---Terri
Maybe not darker blue but too much shadow. Travels is still too hard to read when the image is reduced. Maybe the font's letters are too round. I can read the other entries fonts much easier when reduced---Terri
hello josh, at this stage we designers can see all the submissions, only the 5 qualified designers (including me) will be able to upload new revisions on the designs, I can continue editing the design, what I can't do is use elements from my colleagues' designs , Thanks a lot
Interesting! Made me notice the "motion" marks by the face in your other submissions. Take the ones out on either side of the face and your golden. ---Terri
I really like this one! Simple and easier to read. You've made so many changes. Thank you! I don't like the red streak and plane on #68. This one is best now (to me). ---Terri
Guessing that when you look at this logo, on our website, on a phone, it may look a bit washed out with the lighter font. We might like a slightly darker blue.
So, we screenshot and shrunk this one down and the reason we were ready to reject this one is because the boat and plane you can’t make out when it is smaller. Could the boat and plane be bigger? And, maybe add the shading inside the letters to this one like you did on the last entry?
Sweet! Added a whole new depth to the lettering. The lighter color seems to be easier on the eyes. Not sure about the little planes, if it adds to or distracts from the logo. Feeling indifferent on that aspect.
Out of those, I’d say the Sabbia Beduini font is interesting how they added maybe a lighted element or multicolored design to the letters to make it pop. Maybe it is the wider font and different shading too. Not sure what is most appealing about that one, but it stands out.
Of the chosen source of inspiration, which is the most accurate for you? Would you give me an idea to find a good font, or if it is a normal or italic font?
Yes as Josh said leave the 3D but lessen the shading of only the word Travels. Or 3D on Tokoph and what you have here for Travels. I just think the word Travels needs to be more easily read. And thank you for your edits---Terri
My mom is also commenting so, she asked you about that, but I think I like the shading for the 3D effect. I think she was just thinking it was too thick. Maybe still the shading but less of it?!?!? Not sure. Thanks for all the edits!!
But...there's something about the word Travels. On a small image of the logo Travels is hard to read. I still think it needs less letter shadowing so there is more distinction between the letters or maybe a flat font on a color background.---Terri
Thank you! Well, what I will always recommend is that you keep the line around it for printing issues in background colors, the design stands out, from the rest any color you want to see is no problem
on this one it has the same running or speed highlights, the font on this one is a softer blue color for "travel" and I added a more animated plane and ship on the side of the character, let me know your thoughts.
hello josh, here is the design, add small reflections to the characters to give the sensation of running or speed, also change the color in "travels" to red, leave me your thoughts.
Um. Hmmm….could we try maroon and blue color combo with airplane and movement maybe? Or top letters blue and bottom letters in lighter blue? Hard to decide on color options. Your character and suitcase are the best! Having a hard time deciding on font and color scheme and maybe adding movement somehow. LOVE LOVE your designs tho! THANK YOU!!!
hello josh, here is the design with the requested changes, orange color in "Travels", blue line around the design, also in the stickers if you zoom them, there is the tower of paris, the statue of liberty and a palm tree, let me your thoughts.
Ok, love the 3D look of the suitcase now along with all the 3D lettering! Could you maybe change from that light green color to other options and just circle the world and the words with that thin blue line, like in other design?
I love the idea of movement, but not a fan of the light green color. Could it be orange maybe? Just curious. Not sure what other color would look good. Love where you’re headed with this!
hello josh, here is the design, remove the elements like the plane, ship, balloon and red dots, look for another font with 3D depth like the meleta, that was what I had in mind, leave me your thoughts.
Ok, so here’s the difference in my first and second place ranking right now…I love your nurse character the best, but I like Ketut’s background and fonts better. So, it’s hard for me to decide. You both are killing it! Love your designs!
Awesome! Love your work! Do you also have earth model without the red dots? Going back to the font, maybe something that pops with more depth? And for the suitcase, would it have the same effect if you turned it to give it more depth like the character instead of 2D, more 3D? Or, do you think we would lose that look of the stickers on the case? Just curious what your thoughts are, Really LOVE your designs too! - Josh
I really like the higher quality earth model you used! The more I look at these, maybe it’s too much with all the extra plane, ferry, balloon. I love the idea and the quality of the images, but I’m not sure about how busy it all looks. Also, could we see this in other fonts for the words “Tokoph Travels”? - Josh
hello joshua, here is another design, add the planet earth with travel points, in addition to plane, ferries and a balloon, leave me your thoughts, thanks
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