Thank you for choosing my design! I've uploaded two of the required files here, once you approve those, I have additional formats I will send you @ paroly@att.net
#149 This is exactly the same as #148 except the "B" and "1916" are darker. If you prefer the other type of shading (the 1st ranked design) I'll go back to that and continue to work on it.
#148 Here's the cup and logo with changes in the shading, using a bit more gradient. Everything is centered, the cup is centered using the 'B', not the entire cup, because the handle would make it look off- center, if I truly centered the cup.
I'll continue to work on the design per your direction, thanks!
Welcome home and congrats - you are going to be the winner. My only final final requests would be to fine tune the shading on the "B" and the "Tin Cup" and to make sure the "Pro-Am Invitational is perfectly centered. So, maybe one more version. I'd like to get a JPG/PDF file as well as the standard hi-res EPS. My email is paroly@att.net.
#145 This is the logo/date taken directly from your files. I've added subtle shadowing (dark gray, white, lighter gray). Thanks for your feedback!
Janis
- Delete "Est. 2019"
- Add some edging or dimension to insignia to look engraved
- "Birmingham Country Club" can be straight (perhaps same bold font as "Pro-Am Invitational")
- Delete "Est. 2019"
- Add some edging or dimension to "B" on the cup to look engraved
- Add smaller "1916" below B (on cup with same texture as B) as that is Club's founding date and is paired with the Old English B
- "Birmingham Country Club" can be straight (perhaps same bold font as "Pro-Am Invitational")
I still like this version with coat of arms vs Old English B. Maybe lighten and further simplify the coat if arms so it will print and look better. Thanks.
I think think this looks really good. I don't think we need "Tin Cup" in Old English now that we have the "B" on the cup itself. Can we put a small space between "Est." and "2019"? One variation to consider: Can we put the hole thing on a black background with white/grey fonts? Maybe a black rectangle and a black circle as alternatives?
That's it! The "B" looks good. Maybe a bit softer - part of the cup. Also, the "Est. 2019" should move up a bit more, just under Pro-Am Invitational. Looking solid.
Looking good! Sorry to be picky but your Old English "B" is very curvy.
We use a traditional square Old English B. Microsoft Word font = Old English Text MC.
Added shading to 'Tin Cup', decreased the arc of the text, upper and lower, tightened the space up a bit. Also, decreased the' Est. 2019' text a little. Old English 'B' on cup.
Added shading to 'Tin Cup', decreased the arc of the text, upper and lower, tightened the space up a bit. Also, decreased the' Est. 2019' text a little.
Looking good. I like the shading on this cup better than #43 - softer edges. I also like the font for "Pro-Am Invitational" on #42 better than #43. For both top and bottom text ("Tin Cup" and "Birmingham Country Club") , I'd reduce the curve and move closer to center. Perhaps the "Tin Cup" header should have shading/shadow/edge to give it some subtle emphasis. Maybe shrink the Cost of Arms on cuip just a bit. As an alternative, could we see just an Old English "B" on the cup? Dark Grey or Light Black in color. Thank you!!
#41 I'll continue working on this. I'm working on the cup, trying not to use a lot of gradient effect, you can sometimes run into problems with printing when using gradients. Thanks again for all of your feedback!
I like this layout and font. What if “Pro-Am Invitational” was below tge cup? Also, cup is a lot better but maybe work on shading and lighter tone to look more like a shiny metal cup.
I'm still looking for the perfect "Tin Cup" font. Not finding any Old English dimentional fonts, but I'm sure there's another one that will work. I've thinned out the lines on the cup, minimized the Birmingham Country Club logo on the cup and will continue to work on improving.
Thanks again for your feedback!
Janis
Promising. Maybe bend/arch “Tin Cup” (top of circle) and use bold, dimensional lettering. Then bend/arch “Birmingham Country Club” (bottom of circle). Reduce size of coat of arms on cup. Thin out the lines on the cup - less emphasize on the top and bottom lips and handle. Have “Est. 2019” in same font as “Birmingham Country Club”.
Change to “Pro-Am Invitational” with less rounded, less modern font.
Instead of leaves at bottom, use “Birmingham Country Club”
Cup should be taller/thinner. Remove ball/tee from insignia, just clubs or, perhaps, no insignia or simple b/w version of BCC Coat of Arms which is visible on bhamcc.com.
#17 Here's the design with the cup as the background. I'll continue to work on this. Would you like to include an establish date? Thanks for your feedback!
I'm trying out different fonts as well as layout. What is the name of the private club, it might look cool to have that across the top of the shield, in small type.
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I'll continue to work on the design per your direction, thanks!
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Thank you for commenting!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1f70wrhxqlv1kjg/Old%20English%20B%20Logo.pdf?dl=0
- Delete "Est. 2019"
- Add some edging or dimension to insignia to look engraved
- "Birmingham Country Club" can be straight (perhaps same bold font as "Pro-Am Invitational")
- Delete "Est. 2019"
- Add some edging or dimension to "B" on the cup to look engraved
- Add smaller "1916" below B (on cup with same texture as B) as that is Club's founding date and is paired with the Old English B
- "Birmingham Country Club" can be straight (perhaps same bold font as "Pro-Am Invitational")
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We use a traditional square Old English B. Microsoft Word font = Old English Text MC.
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Thanks again for your feedback!
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Change to “Pro-Am Invitational” with less rounded, less modern font.
Instead of leaves at bottom, use “Birmingham Country Club”
Cup should be taller/thinner. Remove ball/tee from insignia, just clubs or, perhaps, no insignia or simple b/w version of BCC Coat of Arms which is visible on bhamcc.com.
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More traditional Old English font might work.
Not sure we need the laurel leaves.
Could the cup be the background instead if tradionsl shield?
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