This is good. Try the "Tight Ends" sort of framing her butt and curving both top and bottom. More motion, skirt flying a little more and a more athletic stance with her legs
A little shorter hair and not as much hanging down by her face, not as many blue lines keep it simpler. Lower rise bottoms (sitting lower on her hips). Shift her so her butt/back is facing the viewer a bit more. Move her far arm so that it looks like she's holding the football from the other side. Thanks!!!
We have this 1 now. Can you show a little bit of her other arm (she looks one armed) and make her hair flow like its windy? "Bar" singular not plural at the bottom.
149 and 150 are good but the girl just isn’t feminine. Look as the cheerleader and baseball player in the top few. Softer less bold lines more relaxed stance with legs closer together.
Everyone loves this one. Can you try for a prettier girl with longer hair in a slightly sexier version of this pose. Move "Est. 2015" to where the stars are.
Hello, How about #112?
I try make leaner and sexier, or need more?
I try other position but when I try to put it in the midle in tighr and ends.. not completely perfect,,
any other idea are welcome..
This is good. Can you make her leaner and sexier with more motion. Hair and skirt billowing like there's wind or she's moving. Put her butt more in the middle and framed by Tight on one side and Ends on the other. also add an "S" to "Sports"
I would say shrink the Tight Ends text a little and make the girl more prominent. Maybe enlarge her enough that the butt is in the middle of the circle
This is much better, but prefer a more block style font that is "pinched" in the middle. So the outside letters are bigger than the inside letters if that makes sense.
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
I update my entries.. here #73 and #75 how do you think?
any other feedback are welcome..
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
This is great. The girl should be the focus. We like a cheerleader with a flipped skirt to fit the theme. Obviously not wine but maybe just Pom poms. The design with the lettering is too busy and the bar was established in 2015.
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just want to make sure.. is this your own idea?
Thank you
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I try make leaner and sexier, or need more?
I try other position but when I try to put it in the midle in tighr and ends.. not completely perfect,,
any other idea are welcome..
Best Regards
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
I update my entries.. here #73 and #75 how do you think?
any other feedback are welcome..
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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