I love #74 but more tiffany blue, love the ribbon..try black smaller font w/ create thyroid awareness under TS logo.. a prettier butterfly... play with it a bit. thanks! Gena Lee
I'll make the suggested changes and upload them shortly. I'll also do a few options of butterflies. Did you prefer a little more elaborate? I am trying to design an icon that brings instant recognition with simple and elegant lines. Also, I imagine this as a lapel pin, so a modified version of which ever design you choose, may need to be included.
Thanks for the feedback, it's great when the client gets involved in their contest. :)
I uploaded a few more versions. Please let me know if the butterfly is fine or if you would like me to try other shapes. I made the letters gray because the black letting was looking too stark (in my opinion) and overwhelming the butterfly. I will upload a version with the lettering black, so as to get your opinion. Again, please feel to request any changes.
Okay, I am loving this.... my notes are: #99's look but with a smaller butterfly like #100, maybe a rounder edged look. Also, look up restoration hardware's silver sage color.. It's a little softer in color and exactly what I want. Make more scrolls in the butterfly and keep "Thyroid Sexy" one tone.. Maybe try a simpler font. Look at my ratings you'll get an idea of the look I'm going for.... THANK YOU and can't wait to see what you come up with.. I'll need many logos for this business so I hope to work with you after the contest too!! Thanks, Gena Lee
WOW~~~ I LOVE #103 the font is perfect... maybe just a "tad" darker font & the overall butterfly a little bluer not so sage... just a touch!!!! Has to be blue a bit, because blue is the throat chakra! THANK YOU!!!!!! Its awesome! PS- Actually the color of the ribbon is the color I'd like the butterfly I just saw it... And make the ribbon white with it "gently" outlined by the font color just enough to see its a ribbon. subtle!
Last note: the font to be smaller like #105! The white ribbon to be shaded a bit so you can see it! I hope I'm not overwhelming you & that this helps... ugh :))
Thanks for the feedback Gena Lee. Don't worry, your not overwhelming me, in fact I very much appreciate your input. As always, I welcome any change, no matter how slight. In this case it's more than just a logo, since there is a very good cause behind it (my sister-in-law is afflicted with Thyroid disease).
I"m uploading a few more designs with variations on the "awareness ribbon" and text size a bit smaller.
Okay.... as you can see your in 2nd place.... Loving what your doing!!!! I love #108 but make the butterfly smaller and use smaller simple text in (black ink) I love the font of my first place its super simple and fine but in black.. if you can find a font that's similar but of course not the same -- that would be great!! I'm so glad I'm not overwhelming you.. I just need the perfect logo as it will be everywhere! xo
I promise my last notes... make sure the font you choose is spaced out and a bit smaller like 1st place. I like the white ribbon and the size of the butterfly. Perfection Night Owl!
I just uploaded. I also withdrew some of the older logos I had done earlier so as not to clutter the page too much. I you need to see any of them again, just let me know.
Love them! Your in 1st place! One thing... could we make the color just touch more of a blue hue... I love the color of the one that was in 1st!!! Its so close!!! also make the scrolls in the butterfly a little thinner, prettier! Then we're done!
Love them! Your in 1st place! One thing... could we make the color just touch more of a blue hue... I love the color of the one that was in 1st!!! Its so close!!! also make the scrolls in the butterfly a little thinner, prettier! Then we're done!
Twitter @genaleenolin -- I put your logo on TS for feedback and the group said they'd like to see -- Creating Thyroid Awareness, instead of Create Thyroid Awareness!
Abiding by the rules on Logotournament, we are not allowed direct outside contact until the client chooses the winner. While the contest is still in an open phase, we can only communicate through these comment pages or if the contest holder (you) initiates a private message from our profile page. This keeps things transparent and fair for all.
Once you decide on a design and close the contest, outside contact is fine. It is not uncommon to make tweaks after the contest ends, as most designers here are very happy to keep working with the client.
I totally understand.. Its just so hard explaining what I want by message! If I could only speak to u! lol I'm not difficult, I swear!!! :)) I'll make this easy --- The one in the (1st place box) is EXACTLY (the font, size & color) I want, but add (creating thyroid awareness) to it. Also, try the same one without a ribbon, just the beautiful butterfly, adding creating thyroid awareness with all the same text, size all the same as above.... No more notes! Thank you kindly & please check out our FB page so you can get a feel for us and what we're doing. GLN
Hopefully I understood it correctly with the new uploads. If it takes any additional changes, I'm more than happy to do them till we get your perfect logo :)
I did have a chance to go to the Facebook page. I see that some had commented on the ribbon being done so much. But the ribbon is what helps carry the message of awareness without being just a solitary ribbon. The uniqueness of incorporating it into the butterfly is what makes it a recognizable icon associated to Thyroid Sexy. My idea behind the ribbon was to make it stand out as a "Cause" and not like just a nice butterfly brooch. I feel the butterfly/ribbon icon carries the message even if there were no text or tag line added.
I did not post on the Facebook page in order to keep the contest fair, so I posted here so that I can respond to the comment made.
Please don't shy away from any additional request as different color, shape, flourishes ... Thanks :)