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greenlite commented on #146

I'm not sure how, but you can end the contest in your page so I can upload the final files for you to approve :)

7 years ago

trillium commented on #146

Wooo-hooo! what do we do now?

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #146

I forgot to update the slogan. Here's the one

7 years ago

trillium commented on #145

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Still needs reversing dementia... to have each word start with a capital letter.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #145

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Nice, here's the update.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #143

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This brain shape is better, can you make it so there is just a little bit more white space all the way around the brain so it stands out more? Other than that it looks ready to me. -Jess

7 years ago

trillium commented on #143

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same with this one

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #144

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Thanks :))
sorry I forgot to leave the comments

7 years ago

trillium commented on #144

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So close... brain looks great. I want reversing to be Rerversing, dementia to be Dementia... Capilitalize the FIRST letter of each of those words.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #140

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And fit this brain inside the head and then it'll be perfect!

7 years ago

trillium commented on #140

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Can you change the "retreats" to purple and the adjacent lines to green?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #142

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Brain looks good! Don't want the "Preventing...." in all caps, just the first letters of each word. Sorry for the confusion.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #142

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update of the brain fitting fully in the head.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #141

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Can you do anything about fitting the brain fully into the head? That would be the only thing left to do...

7 years ago

trillium commented on #139

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Change for purple "retreats"

7 years ago

trillium commented on #140

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Change to purple "retreats"

7 years ago

trillium commented on #141

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Definitely better with the caps on the "Preventing..."

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #141

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here you go

7 years ago

trillium commented on #136

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So we talked and decided that we'd like the "retreats" in purple and the lines in green -> switch them

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #139

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update

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #140

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update

7 years ago

trillium commented on #121

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Same with this one... can you update with the same fonts as the other one.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #128

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Can you update this one to the same fonts as the other one including caps on first Letter of words below. Then we will choose one

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #138

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Hi, here's the slogan update

7 years ago

trillium commented on #136

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This is looking good. Can we try capitalizing the first letter in: Reversing, Dementia, Optimizing Brain Health

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #136

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thanks for working with me. Here's the update. Removed the tail in the green and enlarge the stem in the blue. Font has adjusted like your suggestions.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #135

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Thanks!!!

7 years ago

trillium commented on #135

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and the lines next to "retreats" looked better when they were purple

7 years ago

trillium commented on #127

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I think if you take this one, get rid of the little tiny tail in the green and make the blue brainstem part larger, it might be it (with bold green retreats)

7 years ago

trillium commented on #135

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And return the "thriving mind" back to bold

7 years ago

trillium commented on #135

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The bold on the retreats is better. I still want the black lines for the outline of head visible.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #133

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can you put a space between thriving and mind on this one, curious how that would look with the capital letters

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #135

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this is the version using the exact shape & style of the sparkles brain with the similar colors location, I altered the lines to be the tree trunk.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #134

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Hi, here's the update where the brain fill in the whole edge of the head, refined the right shape of the brain stem to be more visible like the sparkles version.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #127

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Sorry for delayed feedback. We all got busy this week.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #127

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The last change would be to make the brainstem area look more like the one with the sparkles. Can you do that? Less of a focus on the trunk of the tree... more focus on the right shape of the brainstem.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #127

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So this is our favorite. But we'd like it to fill the whole head. And we want the "retreats" in bold like some of the other designs.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #133

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Hi :) here's the update with the text on the right side, adjusted the stem of the brain pointing downwards.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #132

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Hi! Can we try the head back to the side, keep the head outline grey, same font and weight but black lettering and capitalize the first letters (Thriving Mind again). Also can the brain be tilted or something be done so that the brain stem points down so it's more anatomically correct? Thanks :)

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #132

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alternate version where the head outlined in grey for subtle look so the brain stands out more.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #131

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thriving mind in purple

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #130

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hi, here's the update per your latest feedback. Using all lower caps in blue

7 years ago

trillium commented on #126

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Another thought on the text... let's unbold the "thriving mind" text. let's try a version where "thriving mind" is blue and "retreats" is green

7 years ago

trillium commented on #129

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I like the colors organized this way

7 years ago

trillium commented on #126

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Can you try this version with the "thriving mind" not in caps? Also, let's change retreats to blue. I think the green pops out too much and the purple not enough.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #129

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Ahh.. got it. I think the abstract human shape in the brain giving the different impression especially when we have outlined human head. the minimalist element of that version also could influence the perception of the brain shape, as normal brain shape is detailed and more refined.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #129

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Yeah I think it looks good, I was actually referring though to #121 (the tri-color sun-guy), we like that one too but think that one looks like it doesn't quite fit in the head.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #129

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I think what makes this version not quite fit in the head is the way the tree trunk grows. Previous version the trunk grows directly from brain stem which possibly makes it look not quite right. On this version, I adjusted the tree trunk grows on the right side without taking away / covering the shape of the brain stem if you know what I mean :)

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #127

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I do like lower case in same weight best :)

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #127

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Hi, here's the update using the colors order from the sparkles brain.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #124

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Can we use the color layout of the other one with the leaves of this one?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #123

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I think I like lower case better. Can we switch it back to lower case? But all same font size/boldness for "thriving mind"

7 years ago

trillium commented on #121

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Hmm on closer inspection it looks like they are about the same, there's still something about this one where it feels like the brain doesn't fit in the head...

7 years ago

trillium commented on #121

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I think they do look better side by side.

I think we are between this one and the "tree" one at this point. This brain doesn't seem to fit in the head quite as well as the other brain, can you adjust that?

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #126

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here's the stacked version

7 years ago

trillium commented on #124

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Thanks! :-) Can you do a version where the head is above the lettering?

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #125

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alternate colors position

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #124

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Hi, here's the version with purple on the lower right :)

7 years ago

trillium commented on #122

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Or you could try purple in the lower right under the green

7 years ago

trillium commented on #122

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Oops I meant lower right and keeping the purple sorry about that

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #121

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upper case font in same weight

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #123

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upper case font in same weight

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #122

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Hi, here's the version with yellow on the lower left part of the brain.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #61

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Can you do this with yellow in one of the quadrants? Lower left maybe?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #114

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I think we decided we wanted Thriving and Mind in the same amount of "boldness" - 1 font. I like the lines before and after retreats. Let's keep that.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #116

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sorry I didn't realised both brain were in different shape :)
Here's the update using the brain from the one with sparkles.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #115

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thanks, it's getting better. We'd like to see this with the shape of the brain outline more like the one that you just put the sparkles on - it still doesn't look like a human brain, more like an animal brain. Hopefully that makes sense :)

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #114

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version with sparkles on the brain

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #115

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thank you for your additional feedback. Here's the update where the brain is taller and closer to the edge. Upper case for the words, retreats with line on both side.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #109

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Can you also throw out a version with all caps?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #112

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And can you take this one and keep the brain with these colors and change the lines for sparkles?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #109

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And one more thing to play with... can you try using a line before and after retreats so that the "retreats" is not so spread out on the line? I think it would improve it.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #112

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I like this one now. Color made a big difference. Can you try it inside head also?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #109

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So that comment applies really to all the different designs.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #109

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Love your designs, not sure I know which I like the best. I like having the whole head... but the brain needs to be "fitted" inside. Also, the brain looks a little more like a mammalian brain that a human brain. A human brain is a little taller. But I think if we just fit it to edges of the head, it will be about right.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #111

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with outlined of human head

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #112

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new color schemes as suggested

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #109

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Hi thanks for your feedback. Here's the update where the head in the full shape.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #74

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Can you try a version of this one with the head drawn around it like the other one? I think I like this brain more

7 years ago

trillium commented on #95

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Can you increase the size of "preventing and...."

7 years ago

trillium commented on #93

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Hmm how about purple yellow green like you have in the other one. Thanks!

7 years ago

trillium commented on #95

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Thanks! Can you make it go all the way around?

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #93

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Hi, do you have any suggestion what the colors combo you would like to see? thanks.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #93

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Would like to see this with some different color variations

7 years ago

trillium commented on #66

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We like this but it doesn't quite read as brain can you try putting an outline of a head around it (just a thin black line with head facing to the left)?

7 years ago

trillium commented on #68

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I like this version better but it doesn't read as a brain

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #68

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alternate style with the sun in it.

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #67

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Hi, here's the update.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #62

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I like the sun can you do some variations with just a sun without leaves? Thanks :-)

7 years ago

greenlite commented on #59

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thank you so much for your kind feedback. Here's the alternate version of the symbol looks more like a brain and the words in different colors.

7 years ago

trillium commented on #58

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I like the simplicity of the brain, I think it needs to read a little more like a brain and would like to see different colors/fonts that are a little more modern but refined.

7 years ago

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