#1 & #2 - I am referencing these together since I believe they are coming from the same designer. Good job! I like elements from both and am wondering how we can blend?
#2 - The thought bubble adds to much "chatter" to the visual, let's remove it. I like the font on "thoughtful" and "nutrition" but prefer the font on #1 for the "think before you eat". I like the green but I'm not crazy about the blue. Could we try green and purple? for the lighter green could we make it a bit deeper and the same for a purple? I would even be open to another blue possibly. The monkey face in this one is too busy with the striped outline. I'm not sure if the tail is to much or not. Maybe if the colors are changed and the other changes made it will be easier to make a decision on the tail. I am undecided about the direction of the monkey face. I like the sideways view in #1 but prefer the detail in #2. I am also wondering about more of an abstract look? Not so defined? The white space in #1 seems a bit more open. Somehow combining the two and then incorporating purple as the color on the top? More of just a pencil stroke look with a few lines instead of a full face.
Overall great job! I'm excited to see how it progresses.
#1 - great job! It's looking more streamlined. I really like the purple and the removal of tail and striping. The monkey face is definitely better especially the eyes. The mouth and chin still seem a bit pronounced and I am wondering about going more abstract? It still feels a bit to humorous to me. I want to express fun and lightness but not look unprofessional or comic book like. I looked at some of your other designs. I like the Turtle consulting logo. Would it be possible to make it a bit more abstract like that logo? I really like the change in font style for thoughtful and nutrition. It's a nice contrast to the other font. Good work!! :)
here is another monkey image I had... I will think how to do him even more abstract... I am off traveling this week... may have some doodle time on the plane!
#9 others are telling me they feel the font is hard to read and not popping out from the screen, I'm wondering if the two toned font on all of the words is causing part of this along with the font style. "There is no white space between the letters" was one comment a reviewer gave, I think this is especially true between the o,n, and k. I like the "thoughtful" and "nutrition" being in a solid color like some of your earlier versions helped it pop a bit. I'm not sure if putting the words on a background might help also?
#12 I'm not a huge fan of red and I don't really like the monkey picture or the thinking bubbles. The font style is nice but I don't care for the color. Thank you.
#2 I really like the coloring and the sketch of the monkey, the one feedback I am getting from folks that look at it is what jumps out is the word "monkey" yet what I am selling is "nutrition". Can we try to make the word "nutrition" be what grabs your eye instead of "monkey".
#51 is better the Nutrition is bigger but still doesn't "pop" out at you I think because the font is the same as monkey. I like the overall shaper of #11 better it's just tough with the monkey word being so big.
just got back and am trying another iteration ... hope you get the one you love best... thanks for the fun contest and a great break from my business trip!
#61 thanks so much for all your varied designs. You really hung in there and made a ton of changes. You are super talented. I love the bright colors on this one but I don't love the style of font on "nutrition". Your monkey sketch continues to be one of the best and really captured the "abstract" look I was hoping for. Thank you! :)