The interplay of color on this one is the most visually interesting to me. But I still would like to see a more slightly more subtle blue. Also, what about having the word thought darker gray that the word works?
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Updates for #20 : #30 Blue , Green and dark grey font. #31 Bright Blue , green and dark grey font. #32 royal blue , cooler green and dark grey font. #33 , Green, Olive and dark grey font.
I really like the symmetry of this one. Could we try it with the green n the leaf going towards blue green instead of olive? Also what would it look like with the font being in a dark grey?
There is something oceanic about this mark. the wave? maybe if the leaf were flipped up rather than down. I prefer the position of the mark to the left of the logo rather than on top. The font feels a bit like an afterthought.
Beautiful leaf. This logo is simple and probably requires more effort to connect the dots for someone looking at it. I'm not sure about the spatial relationship between the mark and the words. they seem a tad disconnected. Also, I think it would like the words to not be the identical tone as the piece of leaf that is directly adjacent.
I liked the mark on this logo very much. Symmetry appeals to me and I think the leaf is visually interesting. (may look a tad like a shaft of wheat though) It draws the eye without being distracting. I don't care for the olive tone to the green. And I feel like the font could be more interesting.
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#35 Thicker font for THOUGHT darker gray, and thin font for WORKS
#36 THOUGHT slightly thicker.
#37 teal blue.
Thanks for the feedback,
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Serjunan
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New variations for #20.
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Thanks,
Serjunan
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Updates for #20 :
#30 Blue , Green and dark grey font.
#31 Bright Blue , green and dark grey font.
#32 royal blue , cooler green and dark grey font.
#33 , Green, Olive and dark grey font.
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#19 and #20
if there is any other change or variation that you would like to see , feel free to let me know
Thanks,
Serjunan
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Thanks for the feedback,
I have new variations, please check #15 #16 #17.
and Leaf inside a bubble #18
Thanks,
Serjunan
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