Thirsty Soul SocietyLogo Design Contest

How about this background transparent?

Thank you! Can you make the text background transparent, so it is not sitting there in a block? And maybe continue to play with the circles, so that they feel more like a swirl? I'm liking it. Thanks

Please check update#24#25

the dot of the i should be the star, unless the star is somewhere else

I like this. can you remove the dot on the i? and perhaps add in some other shades of bright blue?
Maybe do something else with the slogan?

Hi,
Please check update #22#23

I like how the y is connected to the spiral

Could you try the Great Vibes font (that is what my brand logo is based on) and add in some element of water?

Update

That's interesting. Can you play with it a little more? Perhaps make it have more movement? be spiral-y? Add an element of water?