any other suggestion?
I’ve intentionally kept the overall form and layout from your earlier design, so everything remains consistent and works together as one cohesive whole.
Would you please make the following change:
- Make the train larger and use the original green color in our exanple
- make the hills less detailed and softer rolling hills.
- Use a thinner san serif font for the word HEALSBURG, make the word station larger
- provide other examples of bicyclist and pedestrians
Hi amattioli-sonomamarintrain,
I’d love to hear your feedback on my entry.
If you have any suggestions, please feel free to share them — I’ll be more than happy to revise and improve it for you.
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I’ve intentionally kept the overall form and layout from your earlier design, so everything remains consistent and works together as one cohesive whole.
B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please check my revision on entry #95
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- Make the train larger and use the original green color in our exanple
- make the hills less detailed and softer rolling hills.
- Use a thinner san serif font for the word HEALSBURG, make the word station larger
- provide other examples of bicyclist and pedestrians
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I’d love to hear your feedback on my entry.
If you have any suggestions, please feel free to share them — I’ll be more than happy to revise and improve it for you.
Best regards,
mbahdjoyo