Thank you! I’ll make the road section to the left of the pathway thinner and recolor it to blue, as shown in design #124. When I increased the train size earlier, I proportionally scaled the pathway as well — but I’ll adjust it now to match your reference. Working on the update!
MASIS this is looking very good. Please make the following edit.
Make the section of road to the left of the pathway a bit thinner and recolor to blue just as you had in design #124.
We like the way you have the pathway shown in #124. Here is a link to a example of what we are referring to https://www.sonomamarintrain.org/sites/default/files/Images/ExampleEE.png
The process took a bit longer than expected, mainly because isolating the train from the full image involved a lot of intricate detailing. Still, I’ve completed it and prepared two updated logo versions with the train elevated and scaled up, just as you asked.
Hello! I’ve published the updated designs based on all the recent requests. Here’s a summary of the edits you asked for, which I’ve incorporated:
- The white color on the train changed to match the beige of the pathway
- HEALDSBURG text outlined as in design #56
- Three white lines added next to the word STATION
- Sunset background included from design #57
- Grapes removed from the right side (as shown in ExampleD.png)
- Blue section added to the pathway (as in design #92)
- Train size kept consistent across all versions
- Grape vines placed only on the left side
- Dark orange removed from the train
- Gray area added to the right side (as in design #105)
In addition to these, I’ve also prepared two enhanced versions with improved graphic balance and color clarity.
If I’ve missed anything or if you’d like further adjustments, just let me know — I’ll be happy to revise it!
Thank you for the note! I had actually already made that adjustment yesterday, and I’ll make sure it’s applied consistently across the other versions as well. I’m currently working through all the requested edits — thank you for your patience!
Thank you for the clarification! I’ve reviewed the example and your notes. I’ll update the design by removing the grapevines on the right side and replacing them with the gray area as shown in version #105. The train size will remain exactly as it is, and grapevines will be kept only on the left side across all versions. Working on it now!
Thank you! I’ve reviewed the example and your notes. I’ll prepare an updated version of design #113 with the grapes on the right side removed, as shown in your reference. Working on it now and will share it shortly
Thank you! I’ve reviewed the example and your notes. I’ll prepare a version that includes the three tear drop elements under STATION and the blue section of the pathway as shown in design #92. Working on it now!
Can we see the version with the 3 tear drop design element that is aunder the word station in version #92 and a part of the pathway in blue as shown on design #92. Please use this link to see an example of the edits we would like to see for a new version: https://www.sonomamarintrain.org/sites/default/files/Images/ExampleC.png
I believe I’ve completed all the requested edits — each time I started updating, a new message came in, so I’ve been working quickly to keep up. Please take a look at all the designs I’ve submitted so far, and if anything is missing or needs adjusting, just let me know and I’ll take care of it!
Understood — I’ll add the three white lines next to STATION, prepare both sunset and blue hill versions, and remove the gradients from the windows. On it!
Two more edits: Add the 3 white lines to the sides of the word STATION. Also can we see this design with both the sunset and another verision with the blue hills and clouds.
One more example we'd like to request to see: Can you please show this design with the edits we've indicated in the comments, plus the sunset background that you have in design #57. Thank you
Would you please create a version of this design with the edits that show the white color on the train to the same beige color as the pathway. And the text HEALDSBURG outlined such as in design #56.
We are not seeing a version that show all these elements incorporated into one example
I believe I’ve made all the requested changes. If I’ve missed anything or if you’d like me to adjust further, feel free to repeat the request — I’ll be happy to revise it!
Please change the white color on the train to the same beige color as the pathway. I like the design elements that you have used around the word STATION. Could you also provide and example with the word HEALDSBURG outlined as in design #56.
Please change the white color on the train to the same beige color as the pathway.
Provide an example showing the text HEALDSBURG outlined such as in design #56.
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Make the section of road to the left of the pathway a bit thinner and recolor to blue just as you had in design #124.
We like the way you have the pathway shown in #124. Here is a link to a example of what we are referring to https://www.sonomamarintrain.org/sites/default/files/Images/ExampleEE.png
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- The white color on the train changed to match the beige of the pathway
- HEALDSBURG text outlined as in design #56
- Three white lines added next to the word STATION
- Sunset background included from design #57
- Grapes removed from the right side (as shown in ExampleD.png)
- Blue section added to the pathway (as in design #92)
- Train size kept consistent across all versions
- Grape vines placed only on the left side
- Dark orange removed from the train
- Gray area added to the right side (as in design #105)
In addition to these, I’ve also prepared two enhanced versions with improved graphic balance and color clarity.
If I’ve missed anything or if you’d like further adjustments, just let me know — I’ll be happy to revise it!
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https://www.sonomamarintrain.org/sites/default/files/Images/ExampleD.png
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Note: For all designs please keep the train at this size and the grapevines only on the left hand side.
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We are not seeing a version that show all these elements incorporated into one example
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Provide an example showing the text HEALDSBURG outlined such as in design #56.
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#56?
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- Remove the dark orange shading from the train