I like this, can you so something about the length of the text? Maybe stack the and .com and reduce size. also , please experiment with other color variations.
thanks to rank my designs so high please don't mind to ask about any change that you wanted to see
but remember that to be allowed to send any variation I need to be ranked first.... during the "judging period" just the designer ranked first is allowed to send variations....
just fyi, during that period you can switch the designer ranked first anytime to ask for variations, and select the winner anytime