We really like your latest submission, thank you for your continued efforts! Could you possibly create a draft of it with a white background and black text, as well as one with a darkish golden-brown kind of color?
I apologize if things seem a little vague, it's tough articulating the entire concept over text. The idea is to create a desirable and effortless lifestyle image, through both design and marketing efforts.
I am also very fond of #78... it to me is a perfect fit for your company due to the fact that it is custom (not a font) modern (young), timeless and can be branded easily on all mediums. Please advise if you would like to see any revisions or tweaks on the design.
You are currently fighting for first with Grace, the logo ranked first. People really like your unique design but are worried that it will come across as too sporty if left the way it looks now. The logo would need more of a luxurious/refined feel to it. I know that this comes across as very vague for you, but its hard for me to articulate the concept over this platform.
Hope this helps and I look forward to your efforts!
Γεια σου Nigel (Greetings in Greek) Will revise it a tad, bolden it up a little, and add some fine details to it.
Nigel, it is hard to argue over these kind of platforms but this is something you will have to trust me, the designer on. Think further down the road, apart from just a logotype, think stationary, signage, embroiderment ...etc ... and envision it there.
We really like this desing; however, could you try switch the font to a more cursive/fancy look?
I am aware that your logo would be better for branding, trust me, we have considered this. After all, this is the business that we are in. Our issue is that everyone who we have spoken to, be it potential customer or designer, has said that this look reminds them too much of a sports brand - similar to that of reebok or adidas.
I am trying my best to articulate our thought process so that you can understand where we are coming from. Thanks again for all of your efforts, they are really appreciated.
So, thanks for feedback and the chance of having designed your logo. My personal favs are #209 / #210 with second up #211 & #212. Don't know about #213 / #214...too much collision with the typography and symbol.