this might be the finalist design here. my partners are saying "I like it ... but ... it looks very urban". Meaning "B Boy DJ style" can you try to make the DJ and the band members less "Hip Hop"?
Maybe we make the band members gold? try some variations of just the band / dj members - i like everything else
i appreciate your effort and creativity. Can you center the DJ on the Globe? and line him up horizontally with the dancer on the right (but centered) so he is above the group? Also, can you make the Drum Center (that is white) the same blue as the planet?
I put some notes on the other globe designs. Overall i like this concept and would like to see one with the Drummer and the DJ switched, where the DJ sits on the top and his head /neck extend over above the globe. Make the heads all black to match the bodies. Also do one with the DJ and the Drummer switched exact spaces please. For "The WEDDED" we are def liking Clean Font. Minimalistic Style, Keep The Wedded below as you have it here. This is how your design looks best for sure. I appreciate you trying to put the words in the middle, but I def like it this way. We just have to figure out how to make the font not look so dated. So below the design. Just need a cleaner updated font please. Minimalistic maybe a bit futuristic, but must be easier to read - please and thank you!
To Clarify. Put the band members like they were before on this version, with the DJ Remaining on the top. Remove the Banner and Make the Font Cleaner and simpler. I like the band bigger like it is in your earlier versions for sure. We can try to keep "The Wedded" in the center separating the band from the DJ and put "The" above "Wedded"
I probably need to clarify. On THIS Logo Just make the words "The Wedded" Cleaner, more minimalistic font and leave at bottom of the design. It def looks better to have the words under the globe on this design. Keep the words exactly where they are. Let's just explore some cleaner font options.
update, change the font on this to blue for "The WEDDED" can you match the style of the continents in some way? Pattern - but minimalistic. Def go back to the band as a unit as before, DJ on top is cool
I like the band like this.. keep the same layout for the band here and just shrink them down a bit for the two I ranked highest of yours. The drummer at the top with the band just like it is here.
as i listed in the your design ranked that I ranked second that you did, put the band members back together with the drum in the center like you did originally. Black is good for the figures. So under "The Wedded" we have our 5 piece band. It is ok if they cover the bottom globe a bit.
Make the font with the band on here the same as the one we ranked 3rd for the contest (yours) where the font is white or silver with the blue ribbon. But do the layout of the words like you have here "THE" is on the top row, and "WEDDED" is below it.
ok i see the problem here.. trying to keep the band members in the water area of the globe so they are easily seen. Go ahead and place them across the bottom with in the middle of the bottom section and have them regular looking side by side Horizontally.. as you did with the DJ.
Ok this is excellent - let's do a more simplistic clean minimal font for the wedded - the shading of the font (embossed) is a bit much for our design - the planet with the hexagons is really nice
We are looking for more of the dancing energy design - dance light rays perhaps? And we like the idea of "The Wedded" cutting across the globe somehow. On the words "The Wedded" let's see a richer gold color.. and can u do this design with black figures and blue globe? Trying to find better color energy in design. Love the figure shapes and the overall layout
Where you have the dancers ... (in the globe) can you put break dancers instead? Also a version with a guy on one side and a girl on the other dancing with headphones on?
The sax and the female look good. I think the other MAY be too busy, but not giving up on that idea just yet. I like the 4 phases of the Moon. Can you flip that and do the 1/4 moon first and end with the full moon last as you move left to right? Also can we have the DJ talking into a mic? Keep the records where they are and his right hand (left as you look at him) holding the mic as he is talking into it (like he is working the crowd into a frenzy). His head can be turned to the side so you can see what he is doing. Another option would be him holding the mic and pointing it at the crowd (down towards the logo in this case)
lets see a female singer on the right instead of a male and one of both male and female singing together on the right. On the left add a trumpet or saxophone player next to the guitarist please
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and #129 Black-white version.
Let me know if you need another revision.
Regards,
Dalhaz
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Maybe we make the band members gold? try some variations of just the band / dj members - i like everything else
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