Not sure I made it clear on the original comments that the tag line 'Transforming the Lives of Contemporary Veterans' is to be a seperate file (I will go back & have a look & change it). We want to be able to use it in a different area. Our original design although only very basic, we did it on Powerpoint, is very distinctive to our target audience the Military. We do alot of social media interaction so it needs to be something that fits into a square box. That is why we used the HQ originally to be able to do that. Thank you for your work so far. We like the professional look of it & the simplicity of the man & the T, very clever.
Love the soldier in the middle of the HQ! Red, white & blue are all connected to each part of the military. The 3 however have an immediate America slant which is impactful but we want to appear more nutural. The stars draw attention, make it stand out but not sure they fit. Maybe this could with the Australian Star of David? The idea of the business is to create a new community. One ex-military people can join & empathy can be felt. Our target audience want to leave the Military to be with their families full time. Hope this inpires you more. Thank you for your ideas so far.
Please could you put pick #3 in green. We like the simplicity of this one. Our #1 pick is liked by all of our friends right now because it shows a military person leaving & going to civilian life.
Can we try option #2 without the star in the Q so it is not so busy & more simple. Is there also the option of changing the figures around to have military guy in the middle. Thank you so much for all your work.
What about taking the Military Guy out. The colours & the HQ alone will give the Military audience enough to connect with. Maybe then just the civilian figure in the HQ. Thank you.
Really trying to focus on the military guy coming our of the HQ after training with us as the civilian guy. Not sure if this will inspire you more. The guy in the suit at the moment we do not like, looks a bit casual not corporate. Hope this inspires you more. Thank you.