I like the image of the half clock and it is an interesting approach. I'm not sure about the yellow and the colors generally need to fit in with the website. Also, I had been thinking that I wanted a stand alone graphic separate from the words. On the website I'm going to call it The Time Management Edge, and if you look at the space we have available there the logo would go at the left with the words The Time Management Edge and "Gain up to 12 hours a day" to the right. If you created a separate logo then the words would be to the right. If you care to rework this one a little perhaps you could put the word Management into the graphic and see how that stacks up. You can see the space I have available on the website www.thetimeedge.com.
Thanks for your efforts. I like having a graphic on the left and the words on the right. As far as the graphic is concerned it is appealing visually, but it is too much like a clock and I'd like to see a graphic with more of an "edge" in it.
Thanks for submitting and I'd love to see some more of your work.
Thank you, and I like the idea of using an hourglass as that is an important part of my overall presentation. Instead of having it round, I think that perhaps we need to have something that communicates more of an 'EDGE' and I'd be grateful if you could have a look at that. Also, I don't really like the yellow and would like it instead to be a darker blue. Please do some more work on this concept, as I like the direction are you going in.
As I said in my comments on your other design, I like the idea of the egg timer but in this case there really is no concept of an 'edge'. I think it needs another element and possibly to be tilted?
Thanks, 46 is much closer. I like the colors much better, and the word "Edge" looks great!
Can you work 46 with the clock from 4 and pit a little energy into the dots after the horizontal cross line at the top of the T of time.
Finally, we may also need to use the phrase "The Time Management Edge" on the website (though not elsewhere). Can you see if you can make that work? I do rather like your approach.