The Sweet DetectiveLogo Design Contest

Great and so close. Hopefully last request. Can you take this one and make the tag line title case (upper and lower case) and use the & instead of the and.
Thank you.

Thanks for comment.
Sure, will provide new revisions and fonts right away.

With regards,
Kamil

OK, let's go back to the full body. Can you lift up the black line running to the right and left of the word "the" so that is is centered through the middle of the word "the". Can you try one moving the arm back like you did in the others to give it more space. Can you also try one where you move the table to the left a bit and the detective to the right a bit and enlarge them bit.You have a lot of space to the sides so maybe if you spread it out a little you can make it a bit bigger. Again, I'm trying to get the full detective but also be able to see what is in the case.
Regarding the font, I like when there is the mix of upper and lower case letters like this one. Can you try a couple more fonts that are not all uppercase? I really appreciate your revisions. Thank you! Laura

Thank you for all the revisions. This is the one I am leaning towards.

Hi, just added new revisions with bigger and much more recognizable elements (no table, erased legs) and new fonts.

With regards,
Kamil

Thank you for letting me know. Hope you enjoy your time away. Can I add a couple more requests to the revisions? Can you open the case lid a bit more and possibly pull the magnifying glass back a little to give more space to the items in the case. Again, it's so small and hard to read what's in the case right now. Otherwise I love it!

Hi, unfortunately I'm away from my work place for this weekend (no access to my graphic software).
Will be able to upload new revisions around monday/tuesday.

With kind regards,
Kamil

Your logo is the one i am leaning towards. Before I give the final OK can you try a few things for me. I am concerned that when the logo is printed on a business card, the image will be too small and people won't be able to see it is a briefcase or what's inside. Can you try a few things to make the image bigger...Maybe you can cut the image off at the table so you don't see the table legs or the detectives legs.
Also, can you try a few more fonts for the words. I like this but it is a little generic. The others you tried were too fancy. It needs to be readable but unique! Will I have access to they family of type fonts so I can use it when I make flyers or put on a web site (if I do a website!)?
Thank you.

Hi, just added new revision with bottle and medium sweet box.

With regards,
Kamil

Thank you and I'm sorry for all the revisions but can you replace the cake and cupcake with 2 other packaged food items. Maybe a tall bottle and a medium sized box. Thank you.

Hi, added cupcake and jar of jam as additional content of the briefcase.

With regards,
Kamil

replace the word "and" with an ampersand (&)
thank you.

Hi, thanks for feedback.
Will upload revisions with more sweets in briefcase soon.
You want to switch word "the" with "&" symbol or letter "a"?

With regards,
Kamil

Thank you for the revision. A couple of more options would be great. Can you try it with an & instead of the word "the". Can you try to put a few packaged items in the briefjcaseinstead of one fresh item. I sell jars of jam, bottles of hot sauce, candy bars, cookies, packages of beef jerky. I know you can't fit them all in and I don't want it to get to literal or crowded, but I'm trying to find a way to show more of what i actually sell as opposed to the fresh cake or cupcake (even though it looks great for the logo!)
Is there a way for me to email you actual images of items if that would be helpful?

Can you turn the briefcase 45 degrees so the handle is facing the detective. We would then see it open from the side.
Thank you.

Hi, just added revision with Sweet Detective investigating some sweets in case/briefcase/sweetcase ;)

Any other suggestions appreciated.

With regards,
Kamil

Here is a link to some suitcase images on google: https://www.google.com/search?q=open+briefcase&client=safari&rls=en&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi15v-D2erNAhVSgCYKHRuFDuwQ_AUICCgB&biw=1657&bih=929#tbm=isch&q=open+briefcase+drawing

For some reason I did not see this. I will try to find a picture or photo. How do I send it to you if I find something? The box/case is like a suitcase or a briefcase. I am trying to use this because detectives solve "cases" which is a pun on the "case" that someone can carry.

Can You show me a picture or photo of this boxes/cases (link maybe)?

With regards,
Kamil

Hi, thanks for comment and feedback.
Will prepare new revisions and upload them soon.
Any other suggestions appreciated.

With regards,
Kamil

I love your design and keep coming back to it as a favorite. The problem is I don't sell cake. I am selling boxes of packaged foods. I am calling them cases. Can you show the detective looking at an open briefcase with nothing inside instead of the piece of cake? Can you also remove the word unique from the bottom and recenter. Thank you. It is so close to being perfect!

Can you do this exact one with and add the tag line...Unique artisanal sweets and savories.
Thank you.

Hi, thanks for ranking and feedback.
Added new font option with shorter slogan.

Any other suggestions appreciated.

With regards,
Kamil

Can you change the wording of the page line to say the following.
Unique artisanal sweets and savories And see other previous comments regarding font choice.
Unique artisanal sweets and savories

I really like this image. It's playful and bold. Can you try some different fonts the are a little more unique. It doesn't need to be frilly, i like that you can read it easily and i like that it's not all capitals.
thank you for your submission.

Fixed legs part in this entry.

Hi, here is my concept: detective investigating some sweets on the small coffee table.
Any feedback appreciated.

With kind regards,
Kamil