Please update by deleting the two horizontal straight lines. Then extend the waves of the 'by' a fit further but keeping the same style of the wave. The wave should flow above JetCruiser only.
Thanks for the revision. We feel it looks more like a EKG heartbeat line than an actual wave. Let's revert back to 266 to see our new additional comments.
This one is a bit more extreme (but I think it's worth a try), the line is made to actually go through the wave, and it's visualized as if the wave is wrapping around the line. Also I think it would be more contrasting if the line was made white, what do you think?
In this revision I just extended the line so that it touches the wave. This one still has its own character (wave and line), considering you mentioned that you liked the line because it was like a runway.
Thanks for updating the 'wave" forming of the "by". Could we please see the 'wave' line connect to the two short lines so it looks like they all flow together?
Could you please update the line with "by" with something similar to the one on logo two four seven? Incorporating more of a wave extending from both the b and y.
Please update the font on #109 with the same font used in #135 - we love that style of font!
The original JetCruiser LOGO vector as an .EPS was just uploaded so the coloring of the gold needs to be tweaked a bit more with the gold sheen so it matchers.
For JETCRUISER, please increase the size 10% and show us 15% increase as well.
Hi,
Please check my latest entry for the revision. Also, if I may ask, which side of the white/yellow tinge do you mean? I think I have made the color as close as possible to the original logo that I saw. Thanks
Love the balance of everything. If you could please update the logo as follows:
-lower the line slightly
-please put a bit more space on each side of the "by"
-please ensure that the "y" in "By" does NOT touch JetCruiser in any way
-Please update the black/gold sheen look to match the original JetCruiser logo that was uploaded. Trying to avoid a yellow or white-ish tinge.
We would love to see "The Suite Life" as Small Caps. Also if you could do the updated logo with the above but use a more elegant class font? Possible options are:
Ethereal Semi Bold
Timeless
Argue
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Hi,
Thank you very much for your previous feedback. Here is my revision. It is a bit difficult to find the right fitment especially when "The Suite Life" is enlarged and "by" uses cursive font, because there must be a little adjustment on the horizontal line too, but I still try my best. Hope you like it. Thank you
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Please lower JETCRUISER just slightly so the bottom of the "y" is not as close to the R.
Also, could we see the updated LOGO with the above and then again with JETCRUISER decreased 8-10% in size?
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The original JetCruiser LOGO vector as an .EPS was just uploaded so the coloring of the gold needs to be tweaked a bit more with the gold sheen so it matchers.
For JETCRUISER, please increase the size 10% and show us 15% increase as well.
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Please increase the font size of JetCruiser.
Please change "The Suite Life" to SMALL CAPS lettering.
FYI - "Small caps" in typography refers to a style where uppercase letters are reduced in size to roughly match the height of lowercase letters,"
Please remove the white sheen/coloring...it needs to be black/gold sheen.
Thank you!
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Please check my latest entry for the revision. Also, if I may ask, which side of the white/yellow tinge do you mean? I think I have made the color as close as possible to the original logo that I saw. Thanks
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-lower the line slightly
-please put a bit more space on each side of the "by"
-please ensure that the "y" in "By" does NOT touch JetCruiser in any way
-Please update the black/gold sheen look to match the original JetCruiser logo that was uploaded. Trying to avoid a yellow or white-ish tinge.
We would love to see "The Suite Life" as Small Caps. Also if you could do the updated logo with the above but use a more elegant class font? Possible options are:
Ethereal Semi Bold
Timeless
Argue
LT Afficher Neue
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Thank you very much for your previous feedback. Here is my revision. It is a bit difficult to find the right fitment especially when "The Suite Life" is enlarged and "by" uses cursive font, because there must be a little adjustment on the horizontal line too, but I still try my best. Hope you like it. Thank you
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For the "by"...needs to be a cursive/script look
Le Jour Script (love the look of that on dafont.com)
Bacalisties
Then extend the B outward to the left like a bit of a wave and the Y outward to the right a bit like a wave.
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The Suite Life needs to be 20% larger than JetCruiser. It also has to be the same font color as the logo with the gold sheen.
Font for The Suite Life needs to be elegant, classy but simple...perhaps one of these fonts:
Ethereal Semi Bold
Timeless
Argue
LT Afficher Neue
For the "by", if it can be a bit more prominent and a cursive...maybe a font like:
Le Jour Script (love the look of that on dafont.com)
Bacalisties
Then extend the B outward to the left like a bit of a wave and the Y outward to the right a bit like a wave.