what if you moved the top portion of Entry #1 to the bottom rail and attached it and compressed "The Sticks" to the left side, maybe the moon could end up in the "Sticks" somewhere? I like the way you did the "K" by elongating the leg of the K, maybe it could end up below the line (which will be my metal pipe actually!)
I like #5 a lot. Can you put a bar (line) on the top of The Sticks, that way i can attach to it and the moon can attach too...i ned the words to drop down a bit to at least partially attach to the bottom part (i have to weld to the 2 pipes :-)
#16 & 17 good...can u take out moon, put a hawk sitting in right center of tree & attach "The" to the top line & attach "Sticks" down a bit further so that letters are in the bottom part? Thank you for making such a great effort!