I like aspects of this, but it's a bit plain in color gradience and font style. I would also like to see the whole thing bigger because it's not easy to see the actual image of the tree. Instead of the person being in the midst of the branches, the swirling branches should be a bit above and beyond the "arms" eliciting a feeling of freedom, accomplishment, growth. I would suggest making the image of the tree darker - brown, black with a gradient background from red to orange. The fonts also need a bit more style and life to them. You could incorporate gradients into the words as well. Thanks