Hey Ketut, Nice job for a first draft. I really like the trunk and the spiral and the "outline" of a person in there, but I'd really like to see the blooming branches as well to represent growth. There doesn't have to be as many as in the example I sent, but keep them flowing with no real sharp or hard edges. Also the color scheme seems a bit too light. The clientele will be adults, parents of high school aged kids, and college students, and the tone of these colors feels a bit too "young". The main thing to stick out will be the tree, so maybe making the trunk dark brown with the vertical gradient of colors as a sunset in the background from top to bottom. We would love to see a little richer deeper color palettes and maybe even a little red at the very top. I'm not thrilled with the font of the words. They too should be a bit bolder, and all in the same color, not each having their own color. The emotions we are looking for are courage, strength, growth, determination, hope. Let me know if you need more clarity. Thanks so much.