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the 2 talking characters are connecting (the lines are crossed and interacting with each others) and influencing (the colour between the 2 characters is a combination of the orange and the blue)
Thank you for all your creative ideas, Please note the comment I wrote below today. New idea that came to me late night. Let's focus on a graphic that indicates INFLEUENCE. The goal of working with my clients is not to get them to speak but rather what that leads to - connecting with someone or a group and ultimately to INFLUENCE them. The image of falling dominos came to mind, or possible some type of arrow. Something in this realm is it. Thank you.
Getting close. I am trying to upload a paint version that I mocked up but it it too big to send. I will try again. Here is what I want to convey to you.
1. I mentioned dominos, but it doesn't have to be - just some images that are falling over from left to right simllar to books on a book shelf that are falling over becasue of the influence or weight of the book or dominoe next to it. 2. If using dominoes, use a side view so all we see is a profile of the dominoe 3. Make them much smaller and fit them directly over the word influence 4. Please make them orange Thank you for the fast work!!!!
Great job! We are close. I want to play with the font a bit and a few other items below: 1. Please have the orange bars (dominoes) just starting to fall over instead of most of them already fallen down? 2. Please experiement with the "E" in ChoiceE learning over into the first orange bar and causing the orange bars to fall. 2. Please make the word INFLUENCE stand out a bit more than SPEAK - CONNECT - maybe larger font or maybe lower case letters for the other words. 3. Please move "The" over top of "Speaker's" instead of to the left of it. 4. Please try a sample with the main font that was used in #38, would like to see how it compares to yours.
Thank you again, we just need to tweak it maybe a few more times and we are there. Thank you so much for responding so fast to me each time!
Ok no problems, I'll be working on monday again I guess :) Tomorrow is sunday :) but will be back for the changes (if needed) on monday. Have a nice week end!
I am surprised - I did get some feedback right away so here are a few changes:
1. #50 is the best 2. Please make the blue font all blue without the gradation 3. Can you make all the orange a "richer" orange. 4. Please remove 1 dominoe - only 5 total. 5. Please have the dominoes tipping more - about half way between them in #50 and #48. 6. Please do one with the "e" tipping as i #50 and let's see one without the "e" tipping. 7. Can we make the font slightly larger for Speak - Connect - INFLUENCE
Wow, please go eat and party tonight! Thanks again. I will check in again with my colleagues and get back with you tomorrow. I really appreciate your help so much. Have a good night.
Hello, I heard from some of my peers and most are confused about the dominoes. Let's try a few things.
1. Take the dominoes out. 2. Let's try a light grey color for Speak, and meduim grey shade for Connect, and a dark black for INFLUENCE, The point is to emphasis INFLUENCE 3. Can you add an orange line under the word Choice 4. Let's put the blue gradation back in again in The Speaker's Choice from dark at the top and a little lighter as you go down the letters.
Here are the changes you requested with some variations #74 all changes you requested #75 same but centered #76 I added dominoes between the words speak connect and influence and re-added the dominoes after influence, maybe it makes sense? #77 added a design that represents "influence"
i like left justified for sure better with The, Speaker's, Choice. Here a few other changes:
1. Can you go back to colors used in #53, but add the gradation with the Blue. 2. Can we use orane dots between the words - speak, connect, influene 3. Maybe take the orange line and make it an arrow pointing toward infliunce 4. Maybe a sample with only 3 or 4 dominoes and all have begun to fall
1. For #83, maybe have the arrow go right into the dominoes and show that it is pushing them down 2. Let's go back to the light grey for speak, medium grey for connect and black for infuence and make all 3 of them lower case font. 3. Can you try a differnt version too - if you look at #73, can you make a small bullseye like that and place it where the dominoes have been and then have the arrow point to it? I am not sure about the colors for the bullseye, maybe try a few diferent versions 4. Kari also suggested trying "momentum ball" as a graphic (in the place of the bullseye. Can you try that too?