I like this better than the black one. I'm not sure most people would recognize this as bread. Also the headphones don't really match the bread. The headphones look like clip art.
Can we try this one again with head phones around the bread. Also, can you make the bread look more like the bread in the uploaded photo? This one is growing on me - I like it. thanks.
I like this! Can you make the headphones bigger? Can you add a picture of bread between the headphones? If you notice in the photos (uploaded files) the bread has an "ear" or a little point, kind of looks like a bunny rabbit. Could you try to incorporate that into the loaves. This is getting close!
Like: word arrangement, bold font, lines above and below. Placement of the headphones and bread.
Dislike: headphones and bread are too small. Bread does not look good. Can you refer to the bread photos I uploaded?
This is getting close though. thanks.
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I don't know, if this concept has been used
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Maybe loose the dots?
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Thankyou
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Okey Sir
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Dislike: headphones and bread are too small. Bread does not look good. Can you refer to the bread photos I uploaded?
This is getting close though. thanks.
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Thankyou
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Dislike: cityscape?
Suggestions: incorporate bread and/or headphones outline in place of building