OK this is the ONE. one small edit. the line extending out from "the".... Can you shorten it? Rather than extending all the way to the outside circle can you have it end at the inner circle?
I like this but wish the "the" and "telling" weren't so close. Can we put "telling the stories of the" on the top of the circle and "sourdough community" on the bottom
OK, I'm back. I think this is it. Could I see it with the motto "Telling the stories of the sourdough community" around the circle? Not sure how that will look but maybe you could make it work in a creative way... (reference the HUSK ranked design)
I like the simplicity of this one without the bubbles. I just think the bread is still lacking something (is it a rabbit? a Hershey kiss?) Is there a way we could add something without crowding the microphone? maybe some simple "decorative leaf" markings on the left side???
Ok, I like this simplified version with the circle. I've received some feedback that the bubbles in the bread are a bit confusing/distracting. Can we try a version w/o the bubbles?
OK, I like this one with the microphone (no headphones) can we loose the wheat stalks? Can we try a few versions with different fonts. Also, I'd like to see the bread look a little less chunky (i.e. thick lines) its still not quite there.
I still like this one with the single piece of bread too (I like the bubbles in the other loaves you made). If you notice in the photos the bread has an "ear" or a little point. Could you try to incorporate that into this loaf?
I'm liking this one. The bread is looking more like the bread people associate with sourdough. If you notice in the photos the bread has an "ear" or a little point. Could you try to incorporate that into the loaves. This is getting close!
Like: style of words, configuration of bread and headphones
Dislike: bread looks weird, refer to uploaded photos for bread style, maybe everything in black and white?
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Another direction we could take this is loose the headphones altogether and replace them with wheat stalks... put everything in a circle? just ideas
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Dislike: bread looks weird, refer to uploaded photos for bread style, maybe everything in black and white?
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Thanks,
Edwin